Nonchalant Singular

The novel has good premise but I feel that the author failed to capitalise it well. pros 1) good writing quality 2) intriguing MC 3) Interesting concept of Singularity Cons 1) The novel kind of feels like an info dump in the beginning. But even then , we as readers are kept in the dark pretty much about everything important. Some chapters are just conversations without anything happening. I read all the free chapters and even now I am confused about the specific power of the MC and it's details . 2) A lot of named characters are introduced within a short span of few chapters . it becomes quite tedious to remember who they are and if they are relevant to the story. The names of these characters are so uncommon that it is pretty difficult to remember them as well ( the authors naming sense needs to be improved) 3)The power levels and the concept of Singularity, mutations and what not are quite confusing. Author should have kept it much simpler to digest. 5) It is better for the MC to develop some physical superpower ( or ability ) as well . Or else the chapters might feel dull to the readers and less exciting. The mental ability ( info type) can be considered his cheat or auxiliary ability . It should be kept unknown so enemies are kept in the dark Please don't let this review discourage you . Take it as a constructive criticism amd use it to better your novel. You have got potential . 👍