Bleach: The Eldritch Empire

Hey! Been a while. I've been going through some rough stuff in life, so sorry for not finishing my previous couple of stories/losing the motivation to continue them even though I really hate not finishing what I started. Alas, I've been inspired by the Thousand Year Blood War and the countless abilities shown there, thus I wanna try my hand at writing a Bleach story. I'd say that the Bleach story revolves around a lot of dark undertone, thus I will go by that theme and introduce some dark abilities, Eldritch related abilities. That's all the spoilers you'll get from here. And if you have any questions, you can ask them here. Hope you enjoy the story!

(Writing Quality: 4.2/5 – Your writing has a good emotional pull and dark atmosphere, but sometimes the sentences repeat ideas or could be tightened up for a sharper impact. A little polishing would make it way cleaner and more powerful. Stability of Updates: 5.0/5 – If you keep dropping chapters steadily like you dropped this one, you’re showing strong commitment, and readers always stick around for a story that feels alive and consistent. Story Development: 4.5/5 – The plot moves fast with good tension and reveals, but you could slow down some big moments (like battles or betrayals) to build even more hype and emotion around them. Character Design: 4.7/5 – Akashi feels deep, dangerous, and complicated. Readers will like how he’s not just another basic fighter but someone with real darkness, secrets, and a unique power that feels very Bleach-like. World Background: 4.8/5 – You nailed the vibe of a rough, hopeless world that still has its own rules. It matches the Bleach universe perfectly, especially the feeling of struggling souls before reaching the Soul Society. Total Score: 4.6/5) Your story fits Bleach’s universe insanely well — the dark survival themes, powers tied to the soul, and twisted gang wars feel like something Kubo could've hinted at but never fully explored. You’ve created a character and a setting that could seriously add to the Bleach world, especially if Akashi's Voices tie into bigger lore like Hollows or Zanpakutō spirits.

Superb writing, captivating story, Unique Main character, One of the best and mesmerizing stories I've red so far. Keep up the great work <3

Thank you for your hard work, and eldritch type powers sound so cool. Hopefully all the great old ones make an appearance. Trust your writing style, so 5 stars, good luck.

It's really good for now. And from author's previous work I give 5 stars as a show of trust to his writing skills.

It is a very good story, with a very unsettling and eerie protagonist. If you like stories with elements of HP Lovecraft, you're gonna love it. Irrespective of this, give it a try and see if the Story is your cup of tea.

it's one of the best bleach fics out there, at least from what I've read and the only reason I haven't given this book a 5 star review is because this just doesn't give me the feel/vibe certain fics do yet...overall, it's a good fic to read and it's an original as well... good luck author

Thanks for the chapters, hopento see a lot of chapters and i find the concept of this novel really good, so i hope to see you keep going forward in writing and don't get demotivated or something like that, take care and have a happy day. Thanks for you hard work

Not bad. Can't wait for more. There are very few bleach fics on this site. So I'm glad that there is one more that is certainly a good read. The fic ain't perfect but I do enjoy it. Can't wait for you to explain what the voices are and what his zanpakto spirit is. Hoping his bankai is like ichigos where it powers up the user instead of a mega attack. Him gaining some eldritch form as his bankai for example would be cool.

So far, so good. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .