16-year-old Yun Shuhi's year end high school holidays become twisted when she gets herself involved in a twisted murder case.
She tries to solve it as a curious challenge which quickly pulls her into a deadly game of manipulation and mind games. The deeper she digs, the more she uncovers mysteries and the true nature of the killer she's chasing.
In the end, the killer turns out to be someone she never expected... someone she could strangely relate to.
"Dead Logic" dives deep into the human psyche with clever twists, gripping suspense, and morally grey characters. A dark, thought-provoking thriller.
“Dead Logic” offers a unique blend of dark philosophy, psychological tension, and mystery. The writing quality is thoughtful, often introspective, with a consistent tone that suits the story’s somber atmosphere. However, occasional complex sentence structures can disrupt the flow and may confuse readers, calling for tighter editing. Story development is intriguing, with non-linear storytelling that invites readers to actively piece together the plot. While this adds depth, smoother transitions between events would improve coherence. The characters are a standout feature—especially the protagonist, who is portrayed with emotional complexity and moral ambiguity. Supporting characters are also well-crafted and contribute meaningfully to the plot. The world-building is compelling, mixing dystopian and speculative elements to create an immersive setting. Yet, more specific details about societal structures or history would enhance the realism and stakes of the world. Updates appear to be inconsistent, which may frustrate readers eager to stay engaged with the evolving story. Overall, “Dead Logic” has strong potential. With more regular updates, refined prose, and expanded world detail, it could become a must-read in the genre. It’s a promising read for fans of cerebral, character-driven fiction with a mysterious edge.
It was a very good story. I hope I get many more good stories. I pray that you go far. Take love from your brother. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
--- Review for Dead Logic by Muntasib: "Dead Logic" is a gripping and intelligent debut that hooks readers with its dark atmosphere, unique plot, and psychological twists. The young author shows a remarkable grasp of storytelling, gradually unraveling a world where logic battles emotion and truth is never what it seems. Highly recommended for fans of mystery, suspense, and thought-provoking fiction.
The story has suspense, mysterious clues, creepy atmosphere, and two teen characters (Shuhi and Utaro) who follow a trail left by a serial killer. They uncover strange codes, bloody signs, and twisted riddles that lead from one location to another. The pacing is tight, the plot unfolds like a puzzle, and the vibe is eerie and engaging. Mention that the story is super interesting, keeps you hooked, and has smart writing. Make it sound like a real human wrote it, not AI. End with a 5-star rating and a short positive comment like 'Highly recommended!' or 'Can’t wait for the next chapter!'”