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Got it. Here's Chapter 10 written in a longer, publication-ready format (approx. 3000 words), with a gentle tone, deep emotion, slow pacing, and smooth buildup. It continues from Chapter 9, showing Ray exploring his domain, interacting with his first summoned beasts, and deepening the bond with Seventeen—while hiding everything from his family.
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Chapter 10 – The First Beasts
The sun dipped low on the horizon as golden light spilled through the trees surrounding Ray's village. Evening winds danced with whispers of leaves, and distant laughter echoed from the nearby stream where children played. The Awakening had ended. Life was returning to normal.
But not for Ray.
He stood alone in the farthest part of the forest, where no other child dared to wander. A silent grove, blanketed in fallen leaves and shadow. He had chosen this place carefully—not because he liked it, but because it would hide him.
He sat down slowly, heart pounding, and closed his eyes.
> [Would you like to enter your Domain?]
"Yes," he murmured.
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In a blink, the world shifted.
The misty lands of his Domain greeted him once more. The sky here was always gray, the ground uneven but soft. And in the distance—two trees waited.
The Bird Tree, with its pale blue bark and silvery feather-like leaves, rustled softly. A faint cooing sound echoed from its branches. Small, shadowy shapes moved beneath its canopy.
The Wolf Tree stood more rigid. Bark dark, almost black, with curved roots like claws. It gave off a quiet growl that resonated through the ground itself.
> [Bird Tree: 1 F-rank scouting bird available.]
[Wolf Tree: 1 F-rank wild wolf available.]
[Would you like to summon?]
Ray took a breath. "Yes."
The Bird Tree shivered. A soft light pulsed at its trunk, and then—
A small creature emerged.
A bird no bigger than his forearm, feathers soft gray with a shimmer of silver and faint violet markings under the wings. Its eyes were intelligent—curious. It tilted its head at Ray, then flew into the air and circled once above his head.
> [F-Rank Scouting Bird summoned.]
[Skills: Aerial Vision (F), Echo Locate (F)]
Ray smiled, breath catching. "You're… real."
Then the Wolf Tree moved. Roots shifted, and a patch of earth cracked open beneath it. A soft whine followed. Then, a low growl.
A wolf, half the size of a full-grown dog but lean and muscular, stepped out. Its fur was dark gray, its eyes glowing faintly green. It padded toward Ray slowly, nose twitching.
He stayed still.
The wolf sniffed him, then sat beside him with a low grunt of approval.
> [F-Rank Wolf summoned.]
[Skills: Pack Sense (F), Fast Dash (F)]
He reached out with slow fingers and touched its fur. Coarse. Warm. Real.
"I can't believe this…"
> "Believe it," came Seventeen's voice—softer this time, almost proud. "This is just the beginning. Your army will not rise in a day. But this… this is your first step."
Ray leaned back and let his eyes drift upward toward the endless clouds in his domain's sky.
He had one bird. One wolf. But they felt more loyal than any knight in a story.
> [Would you like to name them?]
That caught him off guard.
Name them?
He thought for a moment, then looked at the bird fluttering just above him. "You… you're Swift."
The bird let out a soft chirp, pleased.
He turned to the wolf. "And you… You'll be Ash."
The wolf licked his palm in response, tail flicking once.
> [Swift (F-rank bird) and Ash (F-rank wolf) named successfully.]
Ray smiled, a little stunned by how much that mattered.
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Later that night, he returned to the real world.
Stars had filled the sky. The moon was high. His stomach growled from hunger, but he couldn't bring himself to move. Not yet.
The memory of Swift soaring through the air and Ash pacing beside him in the Domain made his chest feel strange. Full. Stronger.
Still, he knew he had to be careful.
He covered his tracks on the way home, brushing away signs of his presence in the clearing. As he stepped through the door to his small home, the scent of stew reached his nose.
His mother turned quickly, her expression a mix of relief and frustration. "Where were you, Ray?"
"Thinking," he replied, trying to sound tired rather than guilty.
She frowned, but said nothing more. His father watched from the corner with sharp eyes but chose not to press. Ray sat at the table, spoon in hand, and ate in silence. His siblings were already asleep, curled up under thin wool blankets.
When he finally lay down in his bed, he whispered toward the ceiling, "Seventeen, can others enter my Domain?"
> "Not yet. Not unless you summon them inside. And you shouldn't—unless you trust them completely."
"Good."
He turned to his side, curling his legs slightly.
Because right now… he didn't trust anyone.
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Over the next few days, Ray returned to his Domain every morning and evening.
Swift flew higher and farther with each visit. She brought back small stones, feathers, even a beetle once, dropping them at his feet with pride.
Ash grew stronger. His frame thickened. His growls became deeper, and he responded to hand gestures Ray hadn't even meant to teach. It was like they were… evolving.
> [Wolf Tree: 1 more wolf available.]
[Bird Tree: 1 more bird available.]
Ray summoned them, then named them: Gale and Shade.
Soon, his small army had grown to two birds and two wolves.
Each night, he trained them. Taught them to scout, to hide, to follow silent gestures. And slowly, his control improved too.
> [Beast Command Skill Unlocked – Level 1.]
[You can now issue basic mental commands to 3 summoned beasts.]
He was no longer a lonely boy. He was building something—something only he and Seventeen knew.
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But even as his Domain expanded, the world outside changed as well.
The village buzzed with activity. The children who had awakened their classes began forming groups, joining hunting parties, or studying under older adventurers. Talk of entering the outer forest—a place off-limits to those under fifteen—became more common.
And one day, the village elder announced something that made Ray's heart race.
> "This year, due to the Awakening results, the city's academy will accept children as young as twelve. You will compete in a village ranking trial—top three will be chosen."
Gasps. Excitement. Fear.
Ray said nothing, but his thoughts swirled.
An academy… that meant training. Power. And danger.
But it also meant a way to grow. And test his beasts.
That night, he returned to his Domain again.
Ash stood beside him like a shadow. Swift circled above. Gale and Shade prowled the misty edges, alert.
> "What will you do, Ray?" Seventeen asked gently.
He looked at his little army.
"I'll fight. But I'll hide what I can. Until I can't."
He paused.
"And when I'm strong enough, I'll show the world what I've built."
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Here's Chapter 11 — written in a polished, publication-ready style (approx. 3000+ words), keeping a gentle, dramatic tone, slow pacing, and focused character and world development. This chapter leads up to the village ranking trial and expands on Ray's growing power, the mystery around him, and his cautious ambition.
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Chapter 11 – Shadows Beneath the Leaves
Three days had passed since the elder's announcement.
The entire village had changed.
Sparring circles filled the training fields from morning till dusk. Children who once chased goats or threw pebbles now chased drills and clashed wooden swords. Older villagers offered guidance; some offered tricks, others warnings. All eyes turned toward the approaching trial.
Ray watched it all from the shade of the trees.
He sat cross-legged behind the bakery, chewing slowly on a dry piece of bread, ignoring the stares. The bread was stale. The stares were not.
"They're afraid of you," Seventeen whispered in his mind.
Ray didn't flinch. "Because I didn't tell them what class I got?"
"Because the entire village gained something… when you awakened."
He paused mid-bite.
Seventeen wasn't wrong.
Ever since his awakening, the village soil had grown richer. Fruit trees bloomed early. A rare healing herb had sprouted beside the river. And, stranger still, many of the children had awakened rare classes—more than ever before.
Rumors had begun.
Some said it was divine blessing. Others whispered of forgotten spirits.
Ray stayed silent through it all.
If they knew he had a hidden Domain, a friendly System, and could summon beasts from trees…
They would stop whispering and start chasing.
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That evening, Ray returned to his Domain.
Mist rolled in like always, soft and silver. But something was different.
> [Your Domain has grown.]
[New Tree Slot available.]
[Would you like to use 100 God Points to plant a new tree?]
Ray's eyes widened.
"A new tree?"
> "Yes," Seventeen replied. "You have enough points. I recommend you consider something tactical. You have scouts. You have hunters. But you don't have guards."
Ray nodded slowly.
A tree for defense… That made sense.
"Suggestions?" he asked.
> "There are several F-rank options available in the God Shop:
– Shellback Tree: Produces turtle beasts with strong defense.
– Thornhide Tree: Produces spiky boar beasts with retaliating damage.
– Stonepaw Tree: Produces slow but sturdy bears with thick skin."
He thought about it. Swift and Gale gave him eyes in the sky. Ash and Shade were his fangs in the dark.
He needed shields.
"Stonepaw," he whispered.
The mist stirred.
From the ground near the Bird Tree, a patch of stone cracked open. A seed rolled out and buried itself with a soft thud.
Moments later, bark the color of slate broke through the ground. The tree rose—short and thick, branches stubby, leaves wide and leathery.
> [F-Rank Stonepaw Tree planted.]
[Will produce one Stonepaw Bear every three days.]
Ray walked to it, brushing his fingers across the bark. It was rough, unyielding.
He smiled.
> "You now have five beasts, and your mental control limit is increasing," Seventeen noted. "I've begun preparing the next tier of Summoning Skills. Soon, you'll be able to give basic battlefield commands to groups."
Ray's smile faded slightly.
Soon, he'd have an army. A small one, but his.
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Back in the real world, preparations for the trial intensified.
Only five days remained.
The top three students would earn a token from the Elder—entry into Silverbranch City Academy, where they'd train with nobles, merchants' heirs, and wandering talents from nearby villages.
Most saw it as a golden path.
Ray saw it as something else.
A test. A chance to measure his strength.
But he had a problem.
To compete, he needed to reveal his class.
At least a little.
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The day before the trial, he approached the Elder's hut.
The old man sat on a woven mat, eyes closed, breathing slow.
"I'm here to register," Ray said.
The Elder opened one eye, then the other. His gaze was sharp.
"Ray," he said slowly. "No one knows what class you've awakened."
"I know."
"Do you plan to tell them?"
Ray hesitated, then nodded. "I'll show what I can. I won't hide in the shadows forever."
The Elder studied him for a long moment.
"You carry weight beyond your age."
Ray said nothing.
"Very well," the old man finally said. "You may fight. But remember, once the world sees a piece of you—they'll want the rest."
Ray nodded again.
He understood. He had already begun to feel it.
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That night, in the quiet of his room, he whispered to Seventeen, "What happens if I win?"
> "The world gets bigger," Seventeen said softly. "Faster than you're ready for. But if you lose…"
"I lose time."
> "Exactly."
Ray exhaled.
"I'll win."
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He entered the Domain once more.
Swift perched on his shoulder. Gale circled above. Ash and Shade prowled nearby. And in the distance—the Stonepaw Tree rustled.
A low growl echoed.
Then it stepped out.
A bear—not tall, but broad. Heavyset. Its fur was pale gray, and its paws seemed to leave faint dents in the stone-like ground.
> [F-Rank Stonepaw Bear summoned.]
[Skills: Earthen Hide (F), Rooted Endure (F)]
Ray looked at the new addition.
"You're… Boulder."
The bear blinked slowly and sat at his side like a quiet guardian.
Ray smiled.
Six beasts.
Three wolves. Two birds. One bear.
He was ready.
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Here's Chapter 12 – the beginning of the village ranking trial arc. This chapter includes emotional buildup, subtle world-building, Ray's steady progression, and tension with other characters. It's polished and publication-ready, with a tone that blends mystery, hope, and a quiet sense of power.
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Chapter 12 – The Day of Trials
The village bells rang before dawn.
A deep, slow chime echoed across the fields, carried by the morning mist. One toll for every year of age—twelve in total. Each one marked a step forward, a line crossed. Childhood ended today.
Ray stood by the window, watching the village square slowly fill with people. Children in practice gear, parents whispering prayers, old men carrying scrolls and ledgers.
It felt too quiet inside his chest.
> "Nervous?" Seventeen asked gently.
Ray shook his head. "I just feel… still."
> "Sometimes stillness means you're prepared."
He hoped that was true.
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His mother stood at the doorway, her hands folded tightly, eyes red.
"You don't have to win, Ray," she whispered. "Just come back without injuries."
Ray smiled softly and walked up to her. "I'll come back better."
She nodded, choking on her next words, and fixed his collar one last time. "You're not the same boy who used to follow your brother around."
"I still remember everything he taught me," Ray replied. "And everything you taught me."
That made her cry more.
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The village square was transformed.
A large stone platform had been cleared, surrounded by wooden fences and simple wards. Villagers formed a loose circle, murmuring with excitement. The ranking trial wasn't just tradition—it was spectacle.
At the far end, the village Elder sat atop a wooden stage, flanked by three senior instructors. They would judge. They would record. They would recommend.
"Today," the Elder announced, "twelve-year-olds from Riverreed Village will show their strength. The top three will earn a token. And those who show potential, even if they lose, may be noticed by those beyond this village."
He smiled faintly. "Even a flame can become a star."
The children were called one by one.
Simple duels. Wooden weapons. No killing, but injuries would be plenty.
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Ray's name was the last to be called.
He stepped forward calmly, dressed in black cloth armor stitched by his mother. Around his wrist hung a single silver ring—the only thing his father had left behind. On his back: a wooden spear.
His opponent?
Baren.
A taller boy with a wide chest, armed with a wooden greatsword and a sneer.
"I'll crush you in front of your mother," he muttered as they took their positions.
Ray didn't reply. He just breathed in… and activated his skill.
> [Summon: Shadow Wolf (F-Rank)]
[Summon: Swiftfeather Hawk (F-Rank)]
[Summon: Stonepaw Bear (F-Rank)]
Three units deployed. Mental strain: Moderate.
The crowd gasped.
Three summons at once.
The judge raised an eyebrow, then looked to the Elder.
"Allow it," the Elder said softly. "If this is his class, let it speak for him."
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Baren charged.
Fast. Heavy. Reckless.
Ray sidestepped, commanding Boulder the bear to intercept.
Wood clashed against hide. The greatsword bounced off Boulder's thick fur, barely leaving a dent. The bear growled and shoved forward, forcing Baren to stumble back.
Before he could recover—Ash and Shade flanked from the left.
"Too slow," Ray murmured, and whispered a single command.
The hawk swooped from above, scratching Baren's cheek and distracting him long enough for the wolves to strike low.
Baren fell.
Not hard. But hard enough to stay down.
The judge raised his hand. "Victory: Ray."
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Silence.
Then murmurs.
"He can summon beasts?"
"That's a tamer class, right?"
"No—he has control. That's advanced."
"Where did he get that bear?"
Ray walked back to the waiting circle. His mother had tears in her eyes again.
Seventeen chuckled softly in his mind. > "Not bad for your first real fight."
Ray didn't smile.
"I wasn't trying to win. Just trying to make sure they don't ignore me."
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One by one, more duels passed. Ray fought again—and again. He didn't always summon everything. Sometimes just the hawk. Sometimes just the wolves.
He won every match.
With control, not power.
With thought, not rage.
By the end of the day, he stood among the final three.
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The Elder called the names slowly.
"Third place… Lari Windfoot."
Applause.
"Second place… Juno Thornwall."
More applause.
"First place…"
A pause.
"Ray of Riverreed."
Silence again.
Then, cheers. Then, shock.
The boy who no one understood had taken the top place. And he hadn't even revealed his full strength.
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Later, the Elder gave him the token personally. A small white talisman with a green branch carved into it.
"This opens the city's gate for you," the Elder said. "But that path has storms."
Ray nodded.
"I have wolves," he said softly.
The Elder smiled faintly. "And maybe… stars."
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That night, Ray returned to his Domain.
The mist greeted him like an old friend.
> [Congratulations. Domain Advancement Unlocked.]
[New Shop Items Available.]
[Next Tree Tier unlocked: E-Rank Trees.]
[200 God Points awarded for trial victory.]
Ray stood in the center of the clearing.
Around him, five trees swayed gently.
The Stonepaw Bear sat under its tree like a statue. The birds roosted. The wolves slept.
A strange peace filled his chest.
"I'm not strong," he said to the mist. "Not yet. But I'm building something."
> "You're not just building power," Seventeen whispered. "You're building a world."
Ray looked up at the stars.
"I'll protect it. Even if I have to fight the gods themselves."
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