FEEDBACK: The College System

What if success whispered in your ear, solved your problems... and rewrote reality behind your back?



Rachel never asked to be chosen.



One morning she woke up with gaps in her memory, a strange interface whispering through her thoughts, and classmates acting like yesterday never happened. But when the system began guiding her—subtly at first—life got easier. Her answers were faster. Her instincts sharper. People listened. And others began to fall into line.



Grades soared. Doors opened. Friends changed.



But so did reality.



Her roommate vanishes. Faculty begin to disappear—or forget. A debate turns into a performance. And through it all, Rachel alone remembers the pieces that shouldn’t fit.

The system promises progress. Perfection. Control. But beneath it's code is something hungry. Something watching .

And Rachel may be the last one who can see it coming.



Now Rachel must decide: stay compliant and powerful, or rebel and be erased.



Power is seductive. But compliance has a price—and the invoice always arrives.