DXD: A Cursed Speech
Author: Sentom_D
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A man wakes up in Highschool DxD with Cursed Speech and a Dimensional Chat.
Expect action and the lewd.
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Horrid sentences, almost unreadable, shameless patreon ads mid chapters, childlike type writing 50% of the time, boring and plain dialogues, low to mid quality overall.
I don't recommend a link to Patreon in the middle of each page, it's very annoying [img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived]
all in all a good fanfic hopping for more chapters
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The story is good so far(Ch 3) and has a good start. The power of cursed speech is great from JJK and with the Dimensional group chat just introduced, the MC is sure to get more powerful. The story is just beginning so I can't say too much but a suggestion is to spend more time on descriptions when describing characters and to reduce the pace a little. The reason for suggesting to reduce the pace is that the MC is going through a lot of these three chapters. Since the readers don't have enough background knowledge yet, there is little time to get more familiar with the MC's personality apart from him being horny. Looking forward to more chapters and any improvements.