When I Rise Up
You don’t get a second life. Unless you’re ready to fight for it.
Jonathan Virell is broken. Haunted by loss and drifting through life, he’s given a single chance to change everything, a mysterious invitation to The Grand Finale, a ruthless game where death is permanent, and only one player can rise.
With less than a 5% chance of survival, no allies, and a starting role as a powerless Dust-Eater, Jonathan should be the first to die. But fate gives him one edge: Attribute Retention, a rare skill that lets him keep everything he learns and masters through the stages.
To win, he must evolve. To evolve, he must survive.
As the game pushes him past his limits and deeper into a world of violence, strategy, and betrayal, Jonathan discovers that winning means more than just staying alive; it means rising above the shadows of his past and becoming something unstoppable.
bruh I thought it was some normal real-life based content type novel .but as story progress it gets alot different...but here's the point- 1-details are too great 2-soemtimes the chap is almost finished describing a trivial incident and vice Verca but your describing skill is good.. you can use it more effectively on strenuous events or suspenseful moments tho (I hope it is a bit helpfull) (you can check out"beyond the avatar" I'm still new so I need alot of guidance I will be helpful with your evaluation