Urban Seduction Adventure

The writing quality was great, about the plot i couldn't tell as it was still in it's infancy,,,, the characters though especially the main character who is so beta- the embarrassment, easily stunned, shy, all of this trait repetitively shown over simple situations, i swear every time he meets a beautiful women he gets stunned, and the word extremely beautiful or beautiful was mentioned like 100 times in just 40 ch,, also every time a new woman's character was introduced their will be a long text of description telling how beautiful she is, it's not just about their introductions but also everytime the mc meets them that it's so annoying.......

I came over from the novel "Urban Temptation: The Club of Seductive Housewives." I didn't expect the author to be as consistent as ever... Hehe... Judging by the content, this novel seems to be another all-inclusive, feel-good story where the protagonist collects all the women. I'm really looking forward to it. By the way, it seems like the author's writing has improved a bit.[img=thinking]

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