Hena Ferza never had the luxury of dreaming. Daughter of an alcoholic prostitute, she grew up in shame, solitude, and contempt. At seventeen, she believes in nothing anymore – especially not in love. Her only escape: finish high school and disappear.
Daniel Nim has everything: beauty, wealth, charisma. But behind the perfect image hides a broken, manipulative young man obsessed with control. Women are nothing more to him than dolls he shapes, breaks, and then discards.
He never spoke to her. Until the day he sees her… and chooses her.
She is different. Wild. Cracked. Fascinating. A prey with claws. A challenge.
As the days go by, Daniel weaves his web, approaching her with stealthy steps. And Hena, unknowingly, enters a dangerous game where passion, manipulation, and old scars intertwine. Until she has to choose: bend… or burn it all down.
Nice story, development and a little slow I think. But you must have a plan for your story, and I love to continue to feast on new chapters.