(Rewrite of the original TSLS, unsure if its allowed but hopefully this rewrite is better than the original. And yes, I am the same author of the original, so if you'd like to read the original (unadvised), it is still public.)
Satoya, a guy who daydreamed, zoned out, and barely paid attention to life, finally reached 19. After his birthday, he wakes up from an odd dream with the sudden motivation to step out of his comfort zone and attempt at doing something meaningful for once.
What he doesn’t realize… is that the world he’s been ignoring for his whole life, is a lot bigger — and far more dangerous — than he ever imagined.
But what if this is just a mere draft, a draft made by a desperate author to craft something because of her pathetic ordeal? A last story — for a story that never ended — with her being in the center of fault?
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got peer pressured by my older sister to review my own novel, so here we go. why didn't I 5 star my own story? simple, i find too many flaws (lol, one of them being pacing), and I am indeed tryna fix them but I also realized that, the novel is well, not really meant to be a instant great chapter. so ngl, reviews are reviews, power stones are power stones, I'm just tryna write since I find it fun. almost forgot, if yall got any questions, just ask me. or any suggestions on writing in general. I'm tryna make this novel not as shitty as the original one (god damn the original is inconsistent as hell)
Was recommended this by a friend, and so far, as of chapter 31, the novel is pretty decent. the pacing can be better, however if you like slow burns, you could maybe enjoy this novel (not sure if the burn even happened yet)