Nico Varela

Bro, your fanfic about the coach was dope, but this one? Damn. It's straight fire. No pointless drama, the convos sound like real people talking, and the player system isn’t nerfed at all. This is exactly how a football fanfic’s supposed to be.

Really good start hope you include more of the other aspects too like his time with his mother brand deals contract enquiries with big teams and all . (for example after this season he could go on and join madrid and win the champions league with them while being an integral part which will give him a push to be part of whichever national team he chooses to play in the euros despite his age.

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Muy bueno no lo dejes ......................................................................................................................

Incredible story but slow update just want to know if its a deliberate act by the author

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Dropped ? A shame it was really going well....

Amazing work, maybe a little too fast, but i understand that in football things move really fast, if you cant keep up with it then you are not meant for it.

It’s a great story and I like the Mc. He knows what he wants and is calm and confident maybe a little arrogant but only few football stars aren’t. Like the way the system is implemented it’s not overbearing and keeps the mc focused.

This has decent potential. The author has good Football ideas and knowledge. The system is kinda meh, but it's a good slow growth type. But the only thing I feel lacking is emotions in character design . The mc feels kinda robotic, ai cant properly convey the personality, feelings, emotional growth unless you specifically mention it. It's like a no nonsense Football fic focused solely on the game, which some might like. I'd suggest trying other Football fics to see if you want to add emotions or stick to robotic football. I'll be generous and give a 4 star .

It's an interesting piece of work but the update is too slow