In a world brought to its knees by a relentless outbreak, one man refuses to accept defeat. Amid collapsing systems and fading hope, a new force rises. Not born of command, but of conviction. Bound by loss and driven by purpose, a group of unlikely heroes steps into the shadows of the old world, ready to carve a new path through the chaos. As the infection evolves and humanity teeters on the edge, they stand as the last line between survival and extinction.
This is a story of resilience, of purpose, and of those who choose to fight when all others fall.
The team bond is really strong which will hit the emotions of the readers. Story progression and the character design is well suited. A mixture of survival, sci-fi, action type story. Really enjoyable.
Good Story. I like the pacing, the characters. It's going to be good. Some minor mistakes were seen; they should be corrected.
Good luck.. Your story management is good. I hope you will give us something chilling.. The buildup of the team is going good. As the part said 2.1, I think it has other parts to be published. Waiting for it..
The story consists many things like leadership, failures, bondings. It is good story overall.. The starting, the mid all make sense. Especially Fakhrul, the character decides to stand again after fail his mission, this is good start.
The beginning of the story tells that something big exists in the story. introduction part is quite good. I like it lots. Space monster, Warriors are really a good combo pack for epic battles.
Good start! I think the character Fakhrul is going to be the hero. The story building, words, theme was amazing. Waiting for next part. When will it come?