The Beginning Of A Five Year Agony
Samuel, an ordinary high school student, finds his life irrevocably altered when he and his classmates are unexpectedly summoned to another world. Initially believing they are destined to be prophesied heroes, their hopes for glory and adventure are brutally shattered. They quickly uncover a horrifying truth: the very gods who summoned them are not benevolent saviors but monstrous entities that feed on human souls.
Adding to this betrayal, Samuel's younger sister is accidentally dragged into the summoning, becoming another victim marked for sacrifice. Consumed by grief and a burning need for vengeance, Samuel survives the ritual and forms a desperate pact with Arithmos, the God of War. Empowered by Arithmos's formidable abilities, Samuel now stands as a solitary force, vowing to hunt down and destroy every single god, determined to strip them of everything they possess...
[WSA] 2025
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From pacing to characters, everything was great. Definitely definitely an underrated gem and a must read
A Novel with great potential. Make your writing quality better, it could become a good novel that way. I don't really read Dark Fantasies but it's truly a good story.
Love the story, everything about it is good. Though the side character talk weird. The dialogue feels wonky. Make the side characters shine and it’ll be a 5 star.
An actual rare yet almost extinst slow-burn dark fantasy story that captivates the readers with the way narrative is foretold by the author. It has this immensely proper writing for someone who claims English is not their native language, seemingly to prove otherwise. This story showcases many great examples of "Show, not tell." without trying to exaggerate let alone misusing it in the first place: Direct and clear. This story got a lot of potentials to develop, especially after such a 'poor' start in the beginning. Keep it up.
Author here!, I've wanted to write this story for a long time, and I finally did it. English isn't my first language, so please go easy on the criticism. Oh...and don’t forget to give me your golden ticket and power stone! Haha 😄