I put the review at 5 stars, no honest reason, feel free to make it lesser. also please give me critiques and suggestions where i can improve my writing. thank you and have a good day
2 months ago
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Heron88
Yo, this chapter’s a wild ride! Taiji’s brooding energy and that insane library explosion had me hooked. The glowing sword and his sudden badass mode? Total chills! Ana’s quick cameo adds mystery, but it moves a bit fast. More, please!
I put the review at 5 stars, no honest reason, feel free to make it lesser. also please give me critiques and suggestions where i can improve my writing. thank you and have a good day
Yo, this chapter’s a wild ride! Taiji’s brooding energy and that insane library explosion had me hooked. The glowing sword and his sudden badass mode? Total chills! Ana’s quick cameo adds mystery, but it moves a bit fast. More, please!