Starting from One Piece with the Rinnegan

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my biggest issue with this so far is he wants to join the marines and i absolutely cannot stand any marines bs. but hopefully it's temporary

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Just dropped a new fanfic, it's about a character with the Rinnegan in the One Piece world. He’s not some overpowered guy killing Yonko on day one, but he’s definitely not weak either. Got enough power to survive and grow, so there’s a nice balance. I’d say the story is pretty easy to read, not boring, with lots of action. At least for me, I didn’t feel bored rereading it, which is rare If you check it out, I’d really appreciate it if you left a review. Once the fanfic gets 10 reviews, it’ll get a rating, so that would help a lot! Plus, reviews from others are probably more helpful than mine. Hope you enjoy it!

what's the raw title/Chinese story if I want to search? the premise sounds interesting

even though i don't like mc being in the marines, but the storyline is quite good. mc is strong but not too terrible that he can destroy yonko in a few chapters. besides, i'm curious about the future whether mc will betray the world government (like releasing the marine organization's dependence on the world government) or the world government stabs mc in the back.

Power that enters without being filtered by the laws of the One Piece world, Development that is quite rushed, Gray background in the Naruto world to cover up plot armor in the form of experience that can be added over time, messy tier settings, forced relationships between the two worlds' power systems, development that is too forced for the benefit of the MC, stupid MC who doesn't even care too much about the consequences of his actions on the world government, MC who doesn't maximize the use of canon knowledge, various developments that focus on the MC make the story bland.

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Pretty good for now

plot changing genre should always be indicated, Harem tag missing. perhaps romance from how seemingly all girls suddenly get their cats wet when they see him. the part where he challenged smoker feels out of character from how he was portrayed previously he suddenly became unreasonable.

Another one. There's another translation of this novel with 115 chapters. Feels like every other week we get these. The power scaling is terrible in this novel so you can't really enjoy it. You can give it a try tho; and if you reach chapter 60 without puking your guts( you are either uninterested about details or don't mind power scaling), then you have my respect.

it's interesting that you used to upload raw names earlier but now don't nonetheless fanfic seems good so far