I tried, I really did, but I couldn’t get past the first chapter . There were so many spelling and grammar errors, it was impossible. The concept is interesting but it impossible to read, sorry dude.
6 days ago
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Raven_guard_2192
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4 days ago
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RockNRolla
not bad i like it just need more work on the gramer and world building [img=recommend]
I tried, I really did, but I couldn’t get past the first chapter . There were so many spelling and grammar errors, it was impossible. The concept is interesting but it impossible to read, sorry dude.
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not bad i like it just need more work on the gramer and world building [img=recommend]