In The MCU with Atom Eve's Powers

Nice to see a heroic MC. All the slop of edgy, self-centered, MCs these days are so tiring that a classic hero story is refreshing. Amazing story, Wyatt is a good MC, and the the power is interesting! Looking forward for more and great job, author!

Excellent fic with one of the coolest powers imo, eve was so heavily nerfed in invincible it felt like a joke, so this soothes some of the injustice in my heart. The MC is a good person with a moral compass and complexities, read this and give it stones :)

Decent fic for the most part, the biggest gripe I have with the story is the constant talking that mc does to himself, when it could’ve just been written as thoughts instead. Seriously man, just read your own writing and tell me how dumb it sounds to talk to yourself out loud in public, especially when it’s about mcu things. I stopped reading this because it happens too much. I know it may seem a little harsh, but this is literal common sense. You don’t see Harry Potter constantly talking to himself alone out loud for no reason. It’s supposed to be done sparingly.

This story presents an intriguing premise with underlying irony, particularly in its attempt to centre a character meant to transcend authorial control. However, the execution consistently contradicts that goal, resulting in moments that feel more constrained than the work it's based on. Which is hilarious considering how standoff-ish the author is when critiques of any kind are made against his character's caveman actions. But I'm getting ahead of myself. The writing quality is serviceable—clear and competent without being overly elaborate, though it rarely conveys a strong sense of style or distinctiveness. Update consistency aligns with the standard pace of this platform that favours quantity over quality, and while regular, it doesn’t always enhance narrative cohesion. Story development is uneven. Certain arcs or scenes demonstrate promise, while others lack direction or emotional resonance. The narrative often feels disconnected from the broader world it inhabits, with developments that appear superficial or insufficiently integrated. Character development hinges primarily on the protagonist’s symbolic design—specifically, the concept of two individuals metaphorically stitched together. This concept offered meaningful thematic potential, especially when paired with the character’s powers, but unfortunately, it was underexplored and ultimately sidelined as a secondary plot device. The worldbuilding similarly lacks consistency. While there are brief moments where the setting feels vibrant and alive, these instances are sparse and not well sustained. Overall, the background feels underdeveloped, leaving the reader with an impression of a setting that is both hollow and intermittently compelling. With additional focus on deeper thematic integration and more deliberate pacing, the story could better fulfil its conceptual promise.

Potential i see.

Finally someone has made a fic with her powers. Hope It is good i Will rate It when i finish It.

Good story, but no my cup of tea. Also, I must ask: why pink? I get that it was in the original, but man that looks bad on male hero. .......…

Story's Flow and Character Consistency The writing style itself isn't the primary issue; rather, it's the deus ex machina elements that disrupt the story's flow. Here are some specific points: Character Age and Maturity: The protagonist, despite having transmigrated and combined memories with another person, consistently acts like an 11-14 year old. This contradicts the potential for a more mature perspective that should come with merged memories. Unquestioned Wealth: It's unrealistic that characters who know the protagonist's impoverished and criminal past (like his housemate and "pizza Selena") don't question the source of his newfound wealth. Accepting money from someone with a "shit history" without suspicion strains credibility. Intelligence Inconsistencies: The fanfiction exaggerates the protagonist's brain as being able to process information like a "quantum computer," yet he often behaves with an intelligence level to an adult with an IQ of 51. This inconsistency is gnarly by katseye. Forced Romance: The romantic development feels unnatural and forced, resembling the "one look is all it takes(by dua lipa)" trope, which lacks believable build-up. Repetitive and Exaggerated Details: The story suffers from repetitive details and exaggerations that detract from its overall quality. Writing Quality: This evaluates the author's skill in weaving their original narrative into the existing anime storyline, taking into account both the execution and my personal enjoyment of their writing. Story Development: I rate the coherence and plausibility of the fanfiction's plot, specifically how seamlessly and logically it expands upon or integrates with the anime's established story. Characters: This category covers two aspects: the depth and growth of the author's original characters from their introduction, and the consistency of established anime characters with their canonical portrayals. Update Stability: My rating for update stability will automatically be set to the lowest star rating achieved in any of the other categories. World Background: I assess the fanfiction's setting based on its adherence to the anime's established world, or the creativity and effectiveness of any original elements the author introduces

I really do hate when a author nerf the abilities of the protagonist. The mc is just as strong as eve if not weaker, but for some unexplainable reason the author decided to give him a mental block. he should be able to reshape the multiverse, he can't even reshape animals or humans.

Decent fic. A bit of disappointment regarding story development and character design. Has a cliche plot of time travel or something, from what it seems. MC has a limiter in his mind, limiting his powers and an entity guarding it, who appears to be from a future suggesting a world or reality destruction plot. And MC's character is weak like izuku from mha

Good so far, keep up the good work.

The story is alright. The way the writing is written sometimes makes me feel like it's ai, i dont believe it is. But the way he describes stuff just feel so fluffy and adjectivey or something lol. The update stability is good. A chapter ever 2-3 days which is nice and consistent. The chapters length are also good which are nice. The story development is kind of annoying. I dont really know much about atom eve's abilities other than reading from comments of other people and reading what she could do. Theoretically at least. He ultimately lost his first fight which i dont mind, it was his first fight and really using his abilities in combat, not to mention the person he was fighting against was incredibly strong. But then we see him using his abilities for months and fighting crime and while most, if not all, were just regular thugs and not mutants, we see him getting comfortable with using his abilities in combat. So then we finally see him fighting a mutant and he was running on fumes by the end of it? Was that one trick really that exhausting? Since he was fighting the other guy when he just got his powers for a significantly longer time. Not to mention, that fight really should have lasted only a second or 2. You could have made his clothes incredibly heavy so he would fall and not be able to move like all the other criminals he fought against. You could have put him in a straight jacket so he couldnt use his ability without hurting himself. You could have put a helmet on his head without eyewholes so he couldnt see. And im not imaginitive, yet i could easily think of solutions, some are solutions that you have already used. Everyone is saying that you are nerfing him and well, you are. I understand you may want fights to last longer, to make it more suspenseful or whatever but this is not the way to do it. You created an extremely op character. Even with the barely little training that he has done he is going to wash 99% of the mcu with ease in seconds. No contest. If you wanted suspenseful fights then you should have used a different ability to base your story on. I like the story. I like concept of where this can go, but nerfing the mc or turning him into an idiot whenever any real type of threat enters the scene is frustrating and makes me want to drop. And if i feel like this then im sure im not the only one. IDk, if you want him to struggle in a fight then at least make it someone that should make him work for it and unfortunately there arent that many that could challenge him at this moment. Actually, because of how strong he is, you technically dont need to show many of these fights. They are relatively simple conclusions which dont need showing and you can make this story more of a slice of life. Him interacting with his friends or growing as a person or something, with little sprinkles of him bodying all these pathetic challengers who try to make trouble. Idk, something to think about

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