In The MCU with Atom Eve's Powers

Decent fic for the most part, the biggest gripe I have with the story is the constant talking that mc does to himself, when it could’ve just been written as thoughts instead. Seriously man, just read your own writing and tell me how dumb it sounds to talk to yourself out loud in public, especially when it’s about mcu things. I stopped reading this because it happens too much. I know it may seem a little harsh, but this is literal common sense. You don’t see Harry Potter constantly talking to himself alone out loud for no reason. It’s supposed to be done sparingly.

Nice to see a heroic MC. All the slop of edgy, self-centered, MCs these days are so tiring that a classic hero story is refreshing. Amazing story, Wyatt is a good MC, and the the power is interesting! Looking forward for more and great job, author!

This story presents an intriguing premise with underlying irony, particularly in its attempt to centre a character meant to transcend authorial control. However, the execution consistently contradicts that goal, resulting in moments that feel more constrained than the work it's based on. Which is hilarious considering how standoff-ish the author is when critiques of any kind are made against his character's caveman actions. But I'm getting ahead of myself. The writing quality is serviceable—clear and competent without being overly elaborate, though it rarely conveys a strong sense of style or distinctiveness. Update consistency aligns with the standard pace of this platform that favours quantity over quality, and while regular, it doesn’t always enhance narrative cohesion. Story development is uneven. Certain arcs or scenes demonstrate promise, while others lack direction or emotional resonance. The narrative often feels disconnected from the broader world it inhabits, with developments that appear superficial or insufficiently integrated. Character development hinges primarily on the protagonist’s symbolic design—specifically, the concept of two individuals metaphorically stitched together. This concept offered meaningful thematic potential, especially when paired with the character’s powers, but unfortunately, it was underexplored and ultimately sidelined as a secondary plot device. The worldbuilding similarly lacks consistency. While there are brief moments where the setting feels vibrant and alive, these instances are sparse and not well sustained. Overall, the background feels underdeveloped, leaving the reader with an impression of a setting that is both hollow and intermittently compelling. With additional focus on deeper thematic integration and more deliberate pacing, the story could better fulfil its conceptual promise.

Potential i see.

Finally someone has made a fic with her powers. Hope It is good i Will rate It when i finish It.

Good so far, keep up the good work.

I like it, the hero is interesting and consistent, it's well written, and the main thing is that it's not another shitty Chinese translation

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Excellent fic with one of the coolest powers imo, eve was so heavily nerfed in invincible it felt like a joke, so this soothes some of the injustice in my heart. The MC is a good person with a moral compass and complexities, read this and give it stones :)

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This story Is very good despite their own being like over twenty chapters am completely hook and keep coming back for more every time

Like another comment said a heroic mc is nice to see once in a while. Tired of edgy “perfect” MCs, this is ur place to go.

Great fic so far, keep up the good work.