Building and Crafting in Game of Thrones
Author: Klonluigi
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Rickard Stark, grieving his wife seeks comfort in Winterfell's brothel. From that union twins Torrhen and Lyarra Snow are born in 270 AC. Dying mysteriously in 282 AC, their souls are replaced by twins from our world who are die hart minecraft gamers. With this development a portal appears on Skane, a portal to the minecraft overworld. Watch as they explore, meet new friends, plot and most importantly build.
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Really well written story great quality 10 out of 10 read it
Extremely well written story though readers should be aware that it is kinda slow paced. So far in the 11 chapters published I have also noticed that a few times the chapters had to be updated due to spelling or continuity mistakes. Other than that, I have nothing to complain about.
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Meh... While interesting.... It's too a + b = c kinda story The intrigue is very over the top.... Not to mention plot holes everywhere... Sigh... Let me spell it out CROSSBOW x 10 = Author not creating plotholes...
Fun story so far. pretty early but its unique and Minecraft fanfics are new to me so the powers are interesting and dont feel overused. keep up the good work.
It's honestly a really good story, and I can't wait for more updates and hope it doesn't get dropped
It got even better after my last review. Uploading stability has decreased a little but the plot is awesome, I just wish things would happen a little faster cause we're already in chapter 20 and still in 284 AC.
When I started reading, I wasn’t expecting much. It wasn’t until I really got a few chapters in that. I realize this fanfiction is solid gold it’s awesome.
I really wanted to like this novel. It has a good premise and has a decent plot. They writing style is just terrible, not coherent and the author likes it. I don't know what the top reviewer is smoking. I hope the author takes some lessons and stop relying on tech to compensate.
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I lost interest around ch 15 and tried to fast forward. Oh, the emotion, the tragedy. He doesn't know Ellia personally and risks his life at 12 to save her from the Mountain, goes into a coma and can't say goodbye to Lyanna. Robert doesn't kill the targaryan kids, heh (in which world? He'd strangle them himself). There are some plot "omissions" like: when did he wake up from his coma, why wasn't it written? Wtf was that comment about Cassel when the twins left for an adventure? A lot is written about beyond the wall, the Three Eyed Raven's opinion, which I find pointless after a few sentences. Varys is portrayed as more sinister then he already is, like he and Illyrio had a son together named Aegon and plan to crown him King. Maybe they do, maybe they don't, but the way he spoke is childish, like this whole novel. A lot of details ( like, a whole fxking lot that we don't really need or can be explained later or in fewer sentences) that are meaningless in my opinion. I got lost in them and sometimes I wonder "Who's pov is this?" . This is not an MCs focused story, it's twisted and turned and jumbled POV change.