2 years before Rudeus, a low-ranking Prince is born in the Kingdragom Kingdom at the south of the Central Continent, beginning to write a new story in the world of Mushoku Tensei. His name... Mordred Kingdragon.
Pairings:
Rudeus x Sylphy, and maybe Roxy
Mordred x Eris and Benedicte, and everyone else
MC has abilities and talent of Mordred Pendragon, from Fate Apocrypha, from when she was alive.
The careless use of amplification can cause serious damage to the object being amplified. Additionally, Mordred learned to use amplification before structural analysis, contradicting the original fate mechanics. You mentioned that the new work would have an adequate explanation of reincarnation, but God and Gacha? Seriously? I'm also unclear on the system point, given that Mordred doesn't react to it in any way. Do we only see it? Perhaps future chapters you have already written will override the flaws that have already been posted. I hope so. For now, though, I would say that your previous work on Mushoku Tensei seems much more elaborate and thoughtful. In it, I saw the best explanation of the reincarnation of the fallen and the magic of gravity in the world of Mushoku Tensei.
Auto 5 star for using fate character template Also should add Nina farion to the harem W character W waifu Keep cooking author👍
this 5-star review is just a bribe to add Nina farion in harem as well. The harem is already 4-star with eris and Benedict (don't care much about Sylphy or Roxy) add in Nana and you got a 5-star harem.
Muito bom, mas tem espaço para melhoras. ...... ...... ....... ....... ..... ....... ...... ...... ....... ....... ....... ........ ...... ...... ...... ......