Harry Potter: Book of Lived Time

Yeah mc power is too op and didn’t you say you can’t change stuff that’s gonna happen but you change voldermort death to happen when harry parents die plus just why

love the concept wish there were more like it

I like it, it's peaceful, almost slice of life. The power concept is fresh and feels well thought out. Still, I do feel like it could kill the story by using it to take out all the danger elements or using it too much as a plot device. All in all, 8/10.

I'm about 30 chapters in. The book sounds great, I really like the concept of the MC's power, I really think it's highly original. Unfortunately it annoys me a bit, I can't stand the MC, I didn't buy it. It started with Harry's gender change. I didn't really like the sex change. And I found that these changes to the world were just limited to the Harry Potter universe (despite his changes) and there could have been so much more with his gift. I know it's a bit contradictory but with his book, he could have done a lot more afterwards, I don't know if there'll be much better later on. But although I didn't really enjoy the story, I still think it's better than many others, good luck author/translator.

I kinda like it, but author just made the book a convenient excuse to retcon every mistake MC and author did. TNE did the same premise much better, it has unchangable facts and need some sort of points to use. here MC could easily change reality like he's Scarlett Witch or something. A huge cop out imo.

It’s good ig I just didn’t like it personally cuz HARRY IS FEMALE and he changes tonks age and makes himself her ideal he also appears op right off the bat which I don’t mind but idk it kinda gets rid of some of the excitement

This shit is so cozy and cute. 10/10 made me miss my family

So, originally I started writing this as a comment for the author, just some thoughts… but the more I kept going, it sort of turned into my full take on the story. There are some cool ideas here, but a few things really didn’t sit right with me. First off, the protagonist feels way too passive for a 17-year-old. Teenagers are known for being reckless and emotional, and that just doesn’t come through in how he acts. It’s like he’s just floating through things without much energy or conflict, and it doesn’t match his age—or the situation he’s in. Then there’s the emotional tone and pacing. I don’t mind the genderbend twist with Harry or the idea of making them twins, but the way their bond is written makes it feel like they’ve known each other for a hundred years right out the gate. There’s no real build-up to that level of closeness. And logically, it’s odd too—Harry being male is an established fact in the world, so changing that breaks the rules unless the story clearly defines what can and can’t be altered. The author did say at the beginning that unknown factors can be changed, but facts that are already known or confirmed shouldn’t just be rewritten at will. That rule kind of gets ignored. Which brings me to the power system—it’s broken. The protagonist can rewrite past events and alter reality with no real consequences or limits. That’s a huge issue. There’s no tension when he can just flip through his magic book and make problems disappear. Add to that how the guy acts half the time, and yeah… he starts feeling like one of those weird overpowered pervy protagonists from novels that don’t take themselves seriously. If you’ve read one of those stories, you’ll know the type I mean. If the author really wants this story to land better, the power system needs actual stakes. Maybe limit the changes he can make, or give each rewrite a cost. As it stands, it feels like a cool premise that never fully thought through its own rules—and that hurts the impact of everything else.