Eamon, a young mage bound by a mysterious & evil curse, sets out on a perilous journey to uncover the truth and find a way to break free. Along the path, he faces deadly creatures, powerful kingdoms, and sinister forces that test his strength and resolve. As the darkness grows and enemies close in, Eamon must rely on his wits, his powers, and newfound allies. With danger lurking at every step, his fate hangs in the balance. Will he survive the trials ahead? And more importantly, will he ever be free from the curse that haunts him?
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
i fell in love with this story with the first chapter itself. I like the pacing as well. Its just perfect. The writing is very good. The curse is actually really scary. i have really high hopes from this story
a brilliant start. the premise and setting looks amazing. looking forward to upcoming chapters.
From the very first page, this book draws readers into a richly crafted world, blending compelling characters, thought-provoking themes, and a narrative that flows effortlessly. The author’s writing style is both elegant and accessible, making even the most complex ideas feel relatable.What stands out most is the emotional depth of characters. The story keeps you engaged and invested and while the plot is satisfying on its own.