223: The pride of a newbie

The writing style of these sentences is indeed good.

But, this is not a essay, it is an online article, a novel.

After reading the first chapter, Li Bin didn't even see the protagonist appear.

The whole article is completely unknown.

It was not until the middle part of Chapter 2 that Li Bin saw the protagonist Yu Xiaoyan appear.

As expected by Li Bin, the heroine in the book is a typical literary and artistic young woman. She looks average, has a difficult family, is born in the countryside, and has average academic performance.

In short, she is a literary youth with no three-no women, and she is also full of arrogant and self-pity.

Immediately afterwards, it is described as a handsome, handsome, majestic, wealthy, and young, super tall, rich and handsome man.

What's even more awesome is that this tall, rich and handsome man is still a rich generation! By starting a business, he built a huge country and became the richest man in Hangzhou! 

"I'm a damn girl, I really dare to write!" Li Bin cursed again, without thinking, the next one must be meeting, and then the almost perfect super tall, rich, handsome and domineering president in all aspects. After meeting a female literary youth of three or five, he couldn't stop falling in love with the female literary youth of three or five, who had no appearance, wealth, and education.

Then, the three-no female literary youth rejected the domineering president with inferiority, and the two fell into a bitter love affair.

The emotional entanglements in this must be very abusive.

Li Bin held back and read for more than a dozen chapters, but he really couldn't stand it anymore.

Although online articles do not require any logic or common sense, this is too fucking exaggerated.

It can be said that the beginning of this novel is full of poison and complaints.

Anyway, Li Bin will definitely not be able to bear it.

Even, Li Bin had the urge to beat someone up.

However, Yu Yinyan wrote a female video after all, and women who read online articles might be really good at this.

This is similar to the male lead who has no male lead in the male lead who finally put the nearly perfect female president.

Li Bin doesn't feel that the problem is big.

The biggest problem is that there are too many irrelevant descriptions in the previous article and do not directly enter the topic.

The most important thing about online articles is to have a sense of substitution, to be simple and straightforward, fast-paced, straightforward, and easy to understand.

Li Bin: Yinyan, I have read your writing carefully. Your writing style is really good; but your biggest problem is that your writing style is too good. You must go straight to the topic at the beginning. In the first chapter, you must have the protagonist, establish conflicts, and create a sense of expectation. A large number of irrelevant descriptions like you are redundant, and it is recommended that you delete it.

Yu Yinyan: Ah? ! ! It took me five or six days to write it out! I like it very much, I can't delete it... 

Yu Yinyan: Brother, please look at other places, are there any problems? 

"Fuck!~~" After seeing Yu Yinyan's reply, Li Bin couldn't help but curse.

Sure enough, novices in online literature are all the same. They are unhappy without hitting the wall. They are useless to say anything, they are self-righteous and stubborn.

This kind of person lacks the beating of society. A novice in online literature needs to become a veteran; he must go through a process of being beaten to understand it himself. Teaching is useless, because this kind of novice in self-thinking writing style is better than platinum in online literature, and he cannot listen to the advice of the veteran in online literature.

Li Bin: That's it... that's fine. Your writing style is great. I think your writing style is much better than those great masters in Jinjiang. Come on.

Li Bin had also taught novices who had just started writing online articles before, and knew about these common problems for novices. Anyway, Li Bin did not really want to teach Yu Yinyan to write online articles. Li Bin's purpose was only Yu Yinyan's body, so Li Bin decided to spoil her.

Following Yu Yinyan's words, then wait until Yu Yinyan is full of confidence and find an opportunity to come out before making a strategy.

For literary and artistic young women like Yu Yinyan, they still have to use literary and artistic methods to guide them.

Fortunately, I had obtained literary expertise before, and now I have a first-class literary foundation. It is still okay to pretend to be literary and artistic with young literary women.

At least, it is not worse than an ordinary undergraduate student like Yu Yinyan.

Yu Yinyan: Really? ! elder brother! That's great. If you say that, then I will have confidence! I plan to quit my internship and go home to concentrate on writing books, and strive to surpass you, Brother Bin! 

Li Bin: You can do it, Yinyan, I really like you! It's too easy for you to surpass me. Your basic foundation is much better than me. I guess I'll ask you and learn from you soon.

Yu Yinyan: Haha... Brother Bin is modest, but I will work hard.

Yu Yinyan: By the way, Brother Bin, which website is better to post this work? I always feel that the copyright of Qidian's recent new contract is too crooked. My work is likely to be adapted into a TV series. Wouldn't it be crooked if it has no copyright? I heard from Jinjiang that the water depth will suppress new authors on the Internet, and those small websites have poor traffic... 

"Haha... you'd better try to sign a contract first. When I started writing a book, I was thinking about selling the copyright for tens of millions? It's really awesome." Li Bin cursed speechlessly, and couldn't help but feel a little funny.