Its's very good 👍🏻.
Pretty unique, good grammar, and not the usual happy go dump op character.
A little advice though: Don't keep being smut frequently. Most people don't like it if it gets too much. A bit? its's good.
20 days ago
6
dankoku
GOATED MHA fanfic so far, MC is very mature and knows how to properly use his power. The prologue is great. I like the friends with benefits thing with Mina. Great overall so far, I really like it.
15 days ago
1
CALE_HENITSU
A história é um pouco interessante mais nada de especial, nada que faça vc pensar sobre, é apenas o velho mha, nada novo, tem algumas incrementadas aqui e ali, mas nada realmente que faça você se surpreender.
16 days ago
1
Matthew_D_Santos
its good folks! its a fun read! very goal oriented MC 👍
slight but not really a spoiler bellow
i hope we see him use sensory support items like batman tho
maybe he could have a cool visor with batman style detective vision that can listen in on radio waves and hack into villain stuff like phones? it could also act as super hearing with induction to not block his ears
and maybe he could also have a powerful flashlight between the lenses to do a solar flare like krilin 🤣?
maybe even some batman bombs like flash, frag and pepper spray smoke bombs
ooh and small foam pellet bombs to bind weaker villains or blind soffocate big ones
i would love to see henshin kill gigantomachia by filling up his throat full of expanding sticky foam
dude could just make sharp tentacles to break up the foam if he wants them to live
oooh and maybe his belt could also hold lots of high powered batteries for him to charge up on electricity
dude could totally copy whiplash or the 3rd raikage if he studies enough about electricity and trains up his control and his power storage ability
anyways these are just suggestions tho you do you
Its's very good 👍🏻. Pretty unique, good grammar, and not the usual happy go dump op character. A little advice though: Don't keep being smut frequently. Most people don't like it if it gets too much. A bit? its's good.
GOATED MHA fanfic so far, MC is very mature and knows how to properly use his power. The prologue is great. I like the friends with benefits thing with Mina. Great overall so far, I really like it.
A história é um pouco interessante mais nada de especial, nada que faça vc pensar sobre, é apenas o velho mha, nada novo, tem algumas incrementadas aqui e ali, mas nada realmente que faça você se surpreender.
its good folks! its a fun read! very goal oriented MC 👍 slight but not really a spoiler bellow i hope we see him use sensory support items like batman tho maybe he could have a cool visor with batman style detective vision that can listen in on radio waves and hack into villain stuff like phones? it could also act as super hearing with induction to not block his ears and maybe he could also have a powerful flashlight between the lenses to do a solar flare like krilin 🤣? maybe even some batman bombs like flash, frag and pepper spray smoke bombs ooh and small foam pellet bombs to bind weaker villains or blind soffocate big ones i would love to see henshin kill gigantomachia by filling up his throat full of expanding sticky foam dude could just make sharp tentacles to break up the foam if he wants them to live oooh and maybe his belt could also hold lots of high powered batteries for him to charge up on electricity dude could totally copy whiplash or the 3rd raikage if he studies enough about electricity and trains up his control and his power storage ability anyways these are just suggestions tho you do you
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10000 out of 10 love it Keep up the great work