MHA: Hands on, Quirks Up!

Its's very good 👍🏻. Pretty unique, good grammar, and not the usual happy go dump op character. A little advice though: Don't keep being smut frequently. Most people don't like it if it gets too much. A bit? its's good.

Honestly, I was not expecting much. Whenever I come across MHA fics using uncommon characters, they're generally distasteful or downright bad. However, I'm pleasantly surprised by this one. The MC is an original character with skills similar to Kevin's, not merely inserted roughly. His interactions with the surrounding characters feel genuine enough, and there's even a nice family backstory that can be developed in the future. The MC's personality, while not to my specific taste, feels well written and in line with what we know about him as well. Furthermore, even though you changed the canon so that UA is a university, you followed that with mild changes that make sense to the main characters. As feedback, I would suggest developing the surrounding characters a bit more, especially since they're young adults, so there's plenty of room to introduce new strengths and weaknesses to their personalities. Of course, all of this without forgetting to go deeper into the MC's backstory. Honestly, you've got a lot of talent, and this novel has tons of potential. Try not to fall into the "MC gets strong, kills every villain, gets every woman, and is OP just cause" trap. Even if you want to introduce a harem (which again is not to my taste), there are ways to do that without making the story seem superficial. Keep up the great work!

4 star cause this is a unique one firts one pull up kevin....

GOATED MHA fanfic so far, MC is very mature and knows how to properly use his power. The prologue is great. I like the friends with benefits thing with Mina. Great overall so far, I really like it.

its good folks! its a fun read! very goal oriented MC 👍 slight but not really a spoiler bellow i hope we see him use sensory support items like batman tho maybe he could have a cool visor with batman style detective vision that can listen in on radio waves and hack into villain stuff like phones? it could also act as super hearing with induction to not block his ears and maybe he could also have a powerful flashlight between the lenses to do a solar flare like krilin 🤣? maybe even some batman bombs like flash, frag and pepper spray smoke bombs ooh and small foam pellet bombs to bind weaker villains or blind soffocate big ones i would love to see henshin kill gigantomachia by filling up his throat full of expanding sticky foam dude could just make sharp tentacles to break up the foam if he wants them to live oooh and maybe his belt could also hold lots of high powered batteries for him to charge up on electricity dude could totally copy whiplash or the 3rd raikage if he studies enough about electricity and trains up his control and his power storage ability anyways these are just suggestions tho you do you

Great story but in the second season or end of first will henshin become like Kevin did when Ben hacked the omnitrix like the story cover?

harem?

A história é um pouco interessante mais nada de especial, nada que faça vc pensar sobre, é apenas o velho mha, nada novo, tem algumas incrementadas aqui e ali, mas nada realmente que faça você se surpreender.

I like this a lot the quirk it has limitation and strengths i feel like there can be a lot of character growth to look forward too.

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

10000 out of 10 love it Keep up the great work

Please don’t lose motivation and drop it’s honestly one of my favorite mha ff.

The story is good so far. It's a smart choice to introduce casual relationships in MHA rather than a full-depth harem. Some decisions by MC are rash, but it's maybe more of his quirk disadvantage. But his recent chapters(USJ event) proved that he is not that brilliant to pull an Aizen in mha. I just hope he won't turn a complete real hero slowly due to character development.