The Fall Of The Sea

Okay, so this story starts with a boy on a foggy boat with no memories, and I was like “Ooh, mystery!”—and then things just go. It’s fast, fun, full of weird creatures and even weirder events, and somehow still keeps stacking on more mystery the deeper you go. The world is rich, and the supporting characters are intriguing. There’s this one little guy (you’ll know him when you meet him) who completely stole the show for me. And—look, the main character? Bit of a dunce sometimes. But he's trying his best, and I can't help but root for him anyway. The story has its rough patches here and there, but there's something really compelling at its core. And then chapter 10 hits, and the writing just soars. Recommend if you’re into mysteries, magic, ships, and earnest dorks stumbling their way through something much bigger than themselves.

A compelling read that offers a rich blend of emotion, imagination, and thought-provoking themes. The characters are engaging, the pacing well-crafted, and the story leaves a lasting impression. A worthwhile addition to any reader’s collection.

The world building is simply incredible. I love all the characters so much and the depth to the MC is remarkable. I suggest you ALL read this immeidately! [img=nervous]

A prologue that invites adventure and curiosity in an oceanic world. The protagonist’s amnesia makes it easier for the reader to step into his shoes, while still providing enough information to build the surrounding universe. The described elements are engaging and make you want to learn more. A good introductory scene, although at this stage, we’re still waiting for challenges and obstacles to arise and add stakes to the story.

Goodness me. This piece of literature was not only mysterious, but also had deep sense of wonder and adventure. The story starts off with a beauteous and descriptive setting and introduces us to Aaron: our main character. Even though I've only read a 10 chapters, the quality of writing and the world background is invigorating and regenerative packed with fun but also arduous hardships and fright that Aaron comes across, like the manticore or the mysterious island. It is definitely a story I would recommend to my friends in order for them to enter a world of wonder. Many thanks to the writer; I greatly appreciate your work.

After an intriguing prologue that raises many questions but offers few answers or stakes, the story of The Fall of the Sea pulls us into a series of abrupt, brief, yet above all violent events that turn the life of an extremely unlucky protagonist upside down. If the reader isn’t convinced from the start, they surely will be with the arrival of a second character—no less unfortunate than the first, and whose story is just as tragic. Prepare to be surprised by the twists and turns. The true stakes slowly begin to take shape, destinies are bound to intertwine, storylines to overlap, and while many mysteries remain in this universe, they promise plenty more adventures to come in the rest of the story. (Up to chapter 12)

Good start to hoping for good future development and more chapters to come in the near future. Also hope for a good name for Mr.Krabs a powerful existence like that needs a great name to uphold his legend o7.

I’m certainly biased however I hope that you will all come to understand my rating when more chapter are released! ❤️

I haven’t read much yet but just off the synopsis I love the idea! I know the update schedule is consistent and I hope you’ll keep writing!

Was a good readthrough it does a good job of staying interesting while also building long term, only lacking in the carachters departement. Nice work