The Fall Of The Sea
Author: JollyUmbrella
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Throughout the world, many young people dream of adventures spanning thousands of miles; however, after the sea swallowed the land, many people lost their hope and dreams. On a small boat in the middle of unknown waters, a boy awakens with no memory of who he is or why he is at sea.
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A prologue that invites adventure and curiosity in an oceanic world. The protagonist’s amnesia makes it easier for the reader to step into his shoes, while still providing enough information to build the surrounding universe. The described elements are engaging and make you want to learn more. A good introductory scene, although at this stage, we’re still waiting for challenges and obstacles to arise and add stakes to the story.
Good start to hoping for good future development and more chapters to come in the near future. Also hope for a good name for Mr.Krabs a powerful existence like that needs a great name to uphold his legend o7.
I’m certainly biased however I hope that you will all come to understand my rating when more chapter are released! ❤️
I think this is inspired from one piece though isnt it? Anyways good story and it has potential if you keep putting out good chapters though the first chapter wasnt a prologue more like a chapter 1.