ASOIAF: Essence Of Gacha

excellent. I highly recommend reading it.

Great story so far, haven’t really read anything like this so far in a while so I am genuinely interested in how it goes and the directions that you take it, great start

I hope the updates stay coming, cause I'm already obsessed 🤩

This could've been interesting, if not for the fact that after chapter 2 he is already basically invincible. If you scaled his powers and potential instead of giving such items at chapter 2 it could've been quite entertaining.

It started great, the story had both soul and heart. A man trying to use his cheat to become someone great in GOT world, his cheat was also moderate. However, after 5-6 chapters the downfall starts. Mc gives powerful gacha cards to his subordinate as their cheat instead of summoning those gacha cards character. Also it was supposed to be 1 rare card per 10 card but this starting dwindling suddenly. As well as the system status is inconsistent as one chapter he says he has something at that specific amount and in the next chapter the amount is wrong this destroys the immersion. This proved that author never proof read his work to correct this mistakes. Altogether u can read this if you have nothing to read currently but keep the expectations low.

this story was really fun at first, but it starts to inconherent as the story progresses. the pacing is off and the dialogue starts to sound like it's coming from AI. the first part of the story doesn't have this issue so I'm assuming he was just cracking under pressure from crowd expectations. whenever a story like this is written and no characters are summoned, that's almost a sure sign that the individual is afraid of writing and maintaining complex characters. the latest 20 chapters are a progressively quick escalation of violence and completion of objectives. I have the feeling that he realizes the deficiencies of how he's writing and he's trying to finish things fast. honestly from where I'm at, I have the feeling that he's going to curb stop the walkers in the next 10 chapters just to keep up the pace.

I like it, just wished we got more info on some of the stuff he got from the both the gacha or valyria. Like bro looted old valyria and not once was he seen using a valyrian steel sword, shield, or armor. Heck no mention of dragon eggs, tomes, history of old valyrian families and not to mention homie got a 100kg of valyrian steel from the gacha and didn't look for Tobho Mott to forge himself a sword, nor did he use magic to find Blackfyre or other swords like Truth while he was conquering in Essos.

To start of I'm fine with wish fulfillment. The problem is that this story I boring. The MC and cast has no real personality. The time skips destroy any plot. The MC also doesn't really do anything interesting. To put it simply the story is like a real of images/words that I can't form a bond to, because what's there to like about a MC and story that has no enjoyable plot

too many inconsistencies,i think the author doesn’t proof reading

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. K

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Yeah, there's a lot of mistakes and boring but it is a wish fulfilling fanfic, doesn't really mind, don't mind those little shits, but I agreed with some, the King Of The North should've ended after the House Of Dragons and directly to the war with the Night King and how much it differs due to the influence of the Theon Stark and how he'll lead the fight against the Night King

Lot of ai use, mc’s personality is bland… too op too quick, gacha’s become redundant

It was good at first, but when I played with "time" it got worse and I stopped at chapter 70.