The soft clatter of the wheels beneath them continued like background music, rhythmic and patient. Outside, the stars blinked faintly above the speeding countryside, scattered across the night sky like shy secrets. The train surged past sleeping fields and quiet rivers, its horn occasionally breaking the hush of rural silence.
Inside the second-class sleeper coach, six passengers now sat in a kind of circle—unspoken but understood. The humming of distant snores, the occasional bark of a vendor's call echoing from another coach, and the rustle of bedsheets being pulled tighter—all faded into the background. In this small cluster of strangers, the promise of a story had become something sacred.
Narain opened his notebook again, flipping past dog-eared pages and annotations scrawled in blue ink until he paused at one particular section. His fingers hovered briefly, as though he were holding a secret he was about to share.
"Okay," he said, his voice clearer now, more settled, "I'll narrate a gangster story."
He cleared his throat and began, more confident this time.
"Once upon a time in Mumbai, there was a Tamil—"
"Wait a minute," Rishi interrupted suddenly.
His voice was not loud, but it carried a weight that silenced even the gentle creaks of the berth hinges. All eyes turned toward him.
Narain blinked in surprise. Ajay raised an eyebrow. Even Neeranjana, who had been sipping tea from a flask she carried, looked up with interest.
Rishi leaned forward slightly. "How many times will you start a gangster story with 'Once upon a time in Mumbai'… ruled by a Tamil gangster? You guys keep romanticizing the same plot—poor boy rises, dons a black shirt, gold chain, speaks in single-line metaphors and rules Mumbai streets. Is there anything new?"
There was no mockery in his voice. Only a quiet exhaustion, like someone who had seen too many shadows passed off as substance.
Narain tilted his head slightly, and then—unexpectedly—smiled.
"You didn't look like someone who'd call out tropes," he said, still amused. "But fair point. That's become a worn path."
Neeranjana laughed, setting her flask aside. "That's true, brother. Every film has that same gangster walking in slow motion on Marine Drive, cigarette in one hand, philosophy in the other."
The group burst into low, easy laughter. Even Rajesh chuckled, the laughter curling around his moustache like smoke.
Narain closed the notebook gently, as if letting one story rest to give another space to breathe.
"Alright. Then let's try something else," he said. "I have a another script. Very different tone. Very different soul."
He looked directly at Rishi now—not defensively, but with a spark of challenge. "But before I narrate it, let's do something different."
He leaned forward. "I want you all to imagine the characters first. I'll guide the world, the setting, the atmosphere. You guess what kind of people might live there. Let's see if it matches what I wrote."
Bala's eyebrows rose. "Like a guessing game?"
"Exactly," Narain nodded. "Let your imagination roam. That's the challenge."
Rishi's curiosity was piqued, and it showed in his face. "Wait—are there new characters introduced suddenly in the middle of the story? Because if you want us to guess characters based on setup, we need to know that."
Narain's grin widened. "Good question. No sudden twists. No dramatic 'new entries' five pages in. Just the world. Just the tone. Everything you need is in the first few minutes."
He cleared his throat again and adjusted the page. His voice softened a little, like he was whispering the first line of a dream.
"The title is Pattabiram," he said. "A revenge thriller. But quieter than you'd expect."
The group leaned in, attention sharpened.
"It begins," Narain began, "In a town that doesn't appear on most tourist maps. Pattabiram. A place with one railway station, two barber shops, and more secrets than streetlights."
He paused, letting the sentence hang in the air.
"It's a place where the summer is long, the nights are loud with crickets, and the people… well, that's for you to imagine. Now tell me—who do you think lives there? Who are the key players in a story of revenge set in such a place?"
A beat passed before Bala spoke up. "The stationmaster. He knows when people come and go. Probably notices everything, says nothing."
Narain raised a finger in appreciation. "Interesting. Go on."
Neeranjana leaned in next. "There's a teacher. Or a retired one. Someone who's respected, but has something they lost long ago. Maybe a child. Maybe a past identity."
Rajesh, ever the observer, said, "There's always someone who owns the biggest building. Not rich in the modern sense, but the guy who has 'influence'—everyone comes to him during elections, festivals, funerals. He pretends to be neutral but has dirt on everyone."
Ajay, scribbling rapidly in his notepad, said, "There's a boy who delivers newspapers. No one notices him. But he sees everything. That boy… he could be the key."
Narain was still. He was smiling—but not the smile of amusement. This was something deeper. Recognition.
He slowly turned the notebook toward them, revealing the first page of the script. Bullet points, underlined names, faint character arcs. And on that list, almost everything they had guessed—right there.
Rishi exhaled softly. "You really built a living world."
Narain nodded, voice quiet. "Before the plot, before the twist… I built the soil. That's what cinema is missing sometimes. We jump into action before we understand the ground we're walking on."
There was a hush again. But this time, it wasn't silence. It was reverence. The kind that artists share when they realize someone else truly sees.
Narain flipped to the next page.
"Shall I begin the story now?"
Heads nodded. Eager. Unified.
And just as he opened his mouth again, the train let out a long, low whistle that echoed into the night like a note of anticipation.