Cultivation Starting With Treasure Gathering Bowl

Shameless author here! Even though I think my novel isn't 5 stars at all, gotta do it for the motivation, am I right :3 Novel is about an ordinary guy u can find anywhere on Earth, living his 2nd life in a cultivation world with many struggles. He doesn't have any grand dream of immortality or splitting mountains and seas. Just a classic man's romance. Traveling the world with a sword, destroying monsters and enemies, enjoying the best beauties. Join Xitu on his adventure to see if he can achieve this simple ideal!

I have never read a cultivation novel before, but this one was recommended to me by my friend and tbh the story is so good, and I see promise in the story, without spoiling the golden finger of the protagonist is unique and different from most of the other stories.

In a world of spirit stones and quiet struggles, this tale glows like a hidden gem. Xitu isn’t just a cultivator, he’s every forgotten dreamer daring to hope again. Gentle, funny, and quietly profound, this story doesn’t shout to be heard it lingers, like moonlight on ruins. A beautiful beginning. Keep going.

First of all, the transition from modern to traditional is actually grappling. And the grammar is top notch except some typos and minor error. Then, your world building is another thing that set this story apart from others. I already love the scene you've created

I think there's more to the bowl than it seems, just duplicating items won't be enough to compensate for his 31 years of low level cultivator life lol. The writing is very easy and simple to follow, and the tease of development is there, though I'd really hope to see soon those characters and sects teased in the passing conversations of the extra cultivators. I like how the mc is slowly forming a plan in his mind gradually and didn't mindlessly abuse the bowl. Also, MEAT is the way, the best part.

I mean the writing is good and the story is pretty much your normal cultivation story. Theres no realydraw backs here if you like this stuff then this is the novel for you. Keep it up author!

So far so good! No complaints with the writing quality. And I like the premise of the treasure the MC has and his personality! Only feedback I can give is the pacing with his transmigration feels a bit too quick as he doesn't really react. Otherwise, amazing story with lots of potential!