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Ashes of the First Flame

A novel by [Francis 9439]

For centuries, the world of Elaris has burned under the divine light of the First Flame, a sacred fire worshiped by the tyrannical Solar Dominion — a theocratic empire that claims godhood and unity through conquest. The Empress rules with holy fire and iron will, casting down cities that refuse her light, branding all who resist as heretics and rebels.

But across the shattered lands of the Free Marches, a spark of defiance refuses to die.

Kaelen Virelth, the exiled son of a disgraced noble house, is thrust into leadership after his brother is assassinated. Once a scholar and a pacifist, Kaelen becomes the reluctant face of a rebellion. As war spreads like wildfire, Kaelen must decide whether to become a killer to save the world — or lose everything he loves.

On the other side of the war, Serenya Valir, a devoted priestess of the Flame, begins to question the cost of blind faith. Sent to root out traitors within the Dominion, she uncovers dark secrets buried beneath sacred temples — and a prophecy foretelling a choice that will either redeem the world or end it in ash.

Amid the chaos rise other forces: the exiled Scorched Order, mage-knights blamed for a forgotten catastrophe; the elemental Aetherborn Tribes, whose magic the Dominion fears and hates; and the seductive spies of the Sable Garden, who pull strings behind every throne.

As old gods stir and ancient powers awaken, love blooms between enemies, loyalty crumbles into betrayal, and the line between salvation and damnation blurs. To stop the cycle of fire and ruin, someone must destroy the First Flame — or become its final bearer.

But power never dies quietly.

Ashes of  the First Flame

The snow had ceased, but the cold remained—a biting, watchful presence. The air no longer tasted of ice, but of metal and ink, as if the very atmosphere had been rewritten during the night.

Rien sat on a broken wall, her cloak wrapped tight around her shoulders, silver hair tangled by sleep and storm. She stared into the distance, toward the horizon where the mountains curled like sleeping beasts, their peaks lost in shadow. The Rebel Thread was quiet now, but it had not left her. It pulsed softly in her chest, as if waiting.

Kaelen approached with two cups of warmed broth. He didn't speak as he handed one to her. They drank in silence.

Only when the sky turned pale did Vel join them, her boots crunching softly on broken stone.

"We need to keep moving," she said. "The Rewrite was just the beginning. The Spire won't stop now."

"It already has," Rien murmured, voice distant. "It blinked. It hesitated."

Maerai's voice cut in from behind. "And that hesitation will not happen twice."

A Map That Should Not Exist

They gathered around a cracked table, where Maerai laid out a map unlike any they had seen. It was etched in copper, not ink, and pulsed faintly when touched.

"This map was forbidden by the Loom," she said. "It shows places between the lines of the world."

"No," Maerai replied. "The Vaults were sealed away. But this—this leads to something worse. Or better."

Her fingers traced a curve northward, where a series of symbols spiraled around a dark mark shaped like a broken crown.

"The Vault of Names," she whispered.

Rien looked up sharply. "What's in it?"

"The original names of things. Before they were renamed by the Loom. Before they were bound into their stories."

Vel's eyes widened. "You mean... names the Loom erased?"

Maerai nodded. "Names hold power. And power that cannot be rewritten… terrifies the Spire."

Kaelen leaned in. "Can it help us?"

Maerai met Rien's eyes. "It can help her. If she speaks the name she was before she was Rien, the Loom will lose its hold entirely."

Journey into the Hollow Names

They left the ruins by noon, traveling through deep-cut ravines where trees leaned away from the road and the birds fell silent. The sky was too still. Even the clouds did not drift.

Rien walked at the front, the map tied around her forearm, glowing faintly through her sleeve. Each step felt heavier now—not with dread, but with momentum. With memory.

Maerai stayed close, watching her. The ancient rebel had once stood alone against the Loom, and lost. Now, watching Rien, she saw what her own fire had failed to become.

"Do you remember anything yet?" Maerai asked quietly.

"Fragments," Rien admitted. "A name that never settled. A voice that used to call me differently. But it's slippery."

"When you reach the Vault," Maerai said, "you must be ready to speak it. Without doubt. Or it will devour you."

"What happens if I say the wrong name?"

Maerai's silence was answer enough.

A Warning Carved in Flame

On the third night, they found the trail blocked.

A pyre stood in the middle of the path—twelve feet tall, still smoldering. At its base, words had been carved into the ash-covered stones:

"THE LOOM WAITS WITH OPEN ARMS. RETURN TO THE THREAD OR BE UNMADE."

Kaelen drew his sword. "They know we're coming."

Vel frowned. "But they didn't attack. Just… warned us?"

Maerai knelt by the ash. "No. This isn't a threat. It's a test."

Rien stepped forward, eyes locked on the pyre. "The Loom thinks I'll flinch. That I'll turn back."

At her feet, the path reappeared. The map on her arm grew warmer.

Far above, in the Woven Spire, the Weavekeeper stood before a basin of water that did not ripple.

From the shadows, the figure that wore Rien's face stepped forward again, her golden eyes cold.

"Then we must show her what forgetting truly costs."