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Ashes of the First Flame

A novel by [Francis 9439]

For centuries, the world of Elaris has burned under the divine light of the First Flame, a sacred fire worshiped by the tyrannical Solar Dominion — a theocratic empire that claims godhood and unity through conquest. The Empress rules with holy fire and iron will, casting down cities that refuse her light, branding all who resist as heretics and rebels.

But across the shattered lands of the Free Marches, a spark of defiance refuses to die.

Kaelen Virelth, the exiled son of a disgraced noble house, is thrust into leadership after his brother is assassinated. Once a scholar and a pacifist, Kaelen becomes the reluctant face of a rebellion. As war spreads like wildfire, Kaelen must decide whether to become a killer to save the world — or lose everything he loves.

On the other side of the war, Serenya Valir, a devoted priestess of the Flame, begins to question the cost of blind faith. Sent to root out traitors within the Dominion, she uncovers dark secrets buried beneath sacred temples — and a prophecy foretelling a choice that will either redeem the world or end it in ash.

Amid the chaos rise other forces: the exiled Scorched Order, mage-knights blamed for a forgotten catastrophe; the elemental Aetherborn Tribes, whose magic the Dominion fears and hates; and the seductive spies of the Sable Garden, who pull strings behind every throne.

As old gods stir and ancient powers awaken, love blooms between enemies, loyalty crumbles into betrayal, and the line between salvation and damnation blurs. To stop the cycle of fire and ruin, someone must destroy the First Flame — or become its final bearer.

But power never dies quietly.

Ashes of  the First Flame

The morning after the Vault, the forest was no longer silent.

Crows cried from the canopy. The wind stirred the moss. And somewhere deep beneath the earth, the very bones of the world shifted—trembling at what had been remembered.

Rien stood at the edge of the camp, her breath clouding in the cold air, her hand pressed to her chest where the Rebel Thread now pulsed in time with something deeper: her true name, spoken only once, but echoing through the Weave like a forgotten chord.

Maerai approached cautiously, as one might approach a flame unsure if it would warm or burn.

"You changed the thread," she said. "I felt it. Something realigned."

Rien nodded, still staring into the distance. "The Loom can no longer silence me. Not completely."

"Can you tell me your name?" Maerai asked.

"Not yet," Rien said. "Not until I'm ready to wield it."

Behind them, Kaelen and Vel stirred from sleep, unaware of the new weight that hung in the air like thunder waiting for a storm.

They didn't get far before the first flames appeared—not fire, but people.

Messengers from the northern freeholds, wrapped in charcoal-gray cloaks and bearing the sigil of the Broken Chain. They emerged from the woods with tense expressions and wary eyes.

"You're Rien of the Flame?" their leader asked, a woman with a scar over one eye and soot-streaked cheeks.

Rien looked to Maerai, who gave a faint nod.

"Yes," Rien said, stepping forward. "I am."

The woman knelt. "Then we have heard the name. Not yours—yet. But the call it sent through the Thread. The Spire faltered yesterday. Every rebel across the continent felt it."

"What do you want from me?" Rien asked.

"To follow," the woman said. "And to fight."

Kaelen watched them all warily. "It begins already."

"No," Rien said, her voice soft but firm. "It began long ago. We're just catching up."

Echoes in the Spire

Far away, in the crystalline chambers of the Woven Spire, the Weavekeeper watched through threads of light that trembled with static.

"She spoke it," murmured the voice that never trembled—until now.

The woman beside her—Rien's mirror—stepped forward. Her hair was perfect, her armor gleaming, her expression void of humanity.

"Then we must act. If her name spreads, the Threads will rebel."

"Not all of them," the Weavekeeper said. "Many still believe in the Order. In safety. In the rewrite."

"And what of those who do not?" the mirror asked.

The Weavekeeper turned to her, eyes like twin needles. "Then we give them the rewrite they deserve."

"I would erase the fire before it becomes a blaze."

Outside the Spire, across the frozen skies, the Loom trembled once again.

By nightfall, Rien's camp had doubled.

Messengers arrived from every direction. Some bore weapons. Others brought songs—old ones, half-forgotten, full of names that had once meant something. All came with one thing in common: they had felt her speak.

The mountains ahead loomed, silent and snow-draped, marking the last border before the southern reaches and the Spire's influence.

Vel counted rations. Kaelen polished blades. Maerai began to whisper to the wind again, as if the world might answer now that it remembered itself.

Rien sat alone on a rock, the stars above forming strange constellations.

One of the new rebels, a young girl named Lira, approached. She couldn't have been more than fourteen. Her voice trembled.

"Is it true?" she asked. "That they gave you a name to keep you small?"

Rien nodded. "They called me Rien. It means nothing."

Rien smiled, something sad and fierce behind her eyes.

"When I reach the Spire," she said, "I'll shout it loud enough that the whole world will remember. Even the stars."

And the wind stirred. And the forest listened.

Because the fire had not just returned.

The Name That Burns