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Ashes of the First Flame

A novel by [Francis 9439]

For centuries, the world of Elaris has burned under the divine light of the First Flame, a sacred fire worshiped by the tyrannical Solar Dominion — a theocratic empire that claims godhood and unity through conquest. The Empress rules with holy fire and iron will, casting down cities that refuse her light, branding all who resist as heretics and rebels.

But across the shattered lands of the Free Marches, a spark of defiance refuses to die.

Kaelen Virelth, the exiled son of a disgraced noble house, is thrust into leadership after his brother is assassinated. Once a scholar and a pacifist, Kaelen becomes the reluctant face of a rebellion. As war spreads like wildfire, Kaelen must decide whether to become a killer to save the world — or lose everything he loves.

On the other side of the war, Serenya Valir, a devoted priestess of the Flame, begins to question the cost of blind faith. Sent to root out traitors within the Dominion, she uncovers dark secrets buried beneath sacred temples — and a prophecy foretelling a choice that will either redeem the world or end it in ash.

Amid the chaos rise other forces: the exiled Scorched Order, mage-knights blamed for a forgotten catastrophe; the elemental Aetherborn Tribes, whose magic the Dominion fears and hates; and the seductive spies of the Sable Garden, who pull strings behind every throne.

As old gods stir and ancient powers awaken, love blooms between enemies, loyalty crumbles into betrayal, and the line between salvation and damnation blurs. To stop the cycle of fire and ruin, someone must destroy the First Flame — or become its final bearer.

But power never dies quietly.

Ashes of  the First Flame

They came not with banners, but with faces.

Rien had just finished sharpening her blade when the first figure stepped from the mist—an old man with ash-white eyes and her father's voice.

"You've forgotten who you are," he said.

"No," Rien whispered. "I remember too well."

The man's form flickered, his edges unraveling like a thread too tightly pulled. Behind him, more followed—women with her mother's laughter, a boy who looked like her brother but smiled with a stranger's teeth, and a soldier who had died years ago at her side, now wearing the sigil of the Spire.

They did not attack. They implored.

"You don't have to fight," said another.

Kaelen stood beside Rien, sword already drawn. "They're illusions."

Maerai shook her head. "No. They're worse."

She knelt, brushing the earth. "They're memories. Stolen and stitched into new shapes. This is the Seamwright's siege. If we believe them, even for a moment, we're lost."

Soran stepped forward, face pale. "I saw him do this once—on the cliffs near Marrowspire. He broke an entire battalion by rewriting their fallen. Made them see friends walking toward them. Made them welcome their own deaths."

"Then we don't welcome anyone," Rien said coldly. "Not tonight."

The camp was ringed in firelight, but the ghost-forms didn't burn. They passed through flame and ash without flinching. They wept. They smiled. They remembered things Rien had never said, but might have, in a world rewritten differently.

Vel paced along the outer edge of the warded circle.

"If I see my sister out there," he muttered, "I'll put a knife in her before I let her trick me."

"She wouldn't be her," Maerai said softly. "But your heart might not know the difference."

Inside the circle, Lira sat with her knees tucked to her chest, eyes wide and wet. She kept whispering a name—"Aerin"—over and over again.

"My first love," Lira choked out. "She died when the Spire flooded our village. But she's out there. I saw her."

Kaelen didn't try to convince her otherwise.

He just took her hand. "We hold on to the truth. No matter what they show us."

And above them all, Rien rose, spreading the Rebel Thread like a cloak behind her. It pulsed once, then again.

"We will not be rewritten," she said, voice rising. "We will not surrender our pain, our joy, or our dead. If the Seamwright wants our minds, he'll find them sharper than steel."

The Loom's Response

Their heads turned in perfect unison toward the firelight, toward Rien. And their mouths opened.

Again and again, louder and louder, until the night itself trembled under the rhythm.

"They want to drown us in it," Maerai shouted. "To flood our minds and stitch their pattern over ours!"

Rien stepped into the chanting figures.

They swirled around her like wind and smoke.

The chant faltered. Then cracked. Then shattered.

Each illusion burned with sudden clarity—revealing the faces beneath. Not her loved ones. Not anyone she knew. Just hollowed forms, sewn from stolen memory, left to unravel in the dark.

The Seamwright Speaks

As the last echo faded, a voice drifted from the far hills. Not loud. Not cruel. Just amused.

"Well played, little threadbreaker."

A figure stood under the moon, robed in woven parchment and whispering wind. His eyes were needles. His fingers bled ink.

"You speak names like weapons," he said, smiling. "But I speak in edits."

"Then come closer. I'll teach you what it means to rewrite a god."

The Siege Without Steel