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Ashes of the First Flame

A novel by [Francis 9439]

For centuries, the world of Elaris has burned under the divine light of the First Flame, a sacred fire worshiped by the tyrannical Solar Dominion — a theocratic empire that claims godhood and unity through conquest. The Empress rules with holy fire and iron will, casting down cities that refuse her light, branding all who resist as heretics and rebels.

But across the shattered lands of the Free Marches, a spark of defiance refuses to die.

Kaelen Virelth, the exiled son of a disgraced noble house, is thrust into leadership after his brother is assassinated. Once a scholar and a pacifist, Kaelen becomes the reluctant face of a rebellion. As war spreads like wildfire, Kaelen must decide whether to become a killer to save the world — or lose everything he loves.

On the other side of the war, Serenya Valir, a devoted priestess of the Flame, begins to question the cost of blind faith. Sent to root out traitors within the Dominion, she uncovers dark secrets buried beneath sacred temples — and a prophecy foretelling a choice that will either redeem the world or end it in ash.

Amid the chaos rise other forces: the exiled Scorched Order, mage-knights blamed for a forgotten catastrophe; the elemental Aetherborn Tribes, whose magic the Dominion fears and hates; and the seductive spies of the Sable Garden, who pull strings behind every throne.

As old gods stir and ancient powers awaken, love blooms between enemies, loyalty crumbles into betrayal, and the line between salvation and damnation blurs. To stop the cycle of fire and ruin, someone must destroy the First Flame — or become its final bearer.

But power never dies quietly.

Ashes of  the First Flame

When they emerged from the Vault, the sky had changed.

It was still morning, but the light held a brittle edge, like glass about to crack. The wind no longer smelled of ash—it carried something sharper, cleaner. The kind of air that comes before a storm that doesn't ask permission to arrive.

Rien stood at the mouth of the Vale, the thread she had drawn from the Vault wrapped around her wrist like a brand. It pulsed faintly against her skin, too quiet for the others to feel. But it whispered to her.

Behind her, the rebels waited—not for orders, but for direction. They'd followed her through battlefields, across broken empires, into the silence of death and back again.

"We don't march as an army," Rien said, voice calm but heavy with promise. "We walk as fire."

But the air between them caught light.

They began with the smaller cities.

Outposts and towns forgotten by the Spire, left to rot at the edges of the world's pages. Places where the Loom's edits were weakest—where people still told stories in secret, where old names lingered in lullabies and prayer.

In Harrenvale, they found a library sealed in stone, its keepers turned to silence decades ago. Rien placed the Vault-thread on the oldest ledger, and the books shuddered. Their bindings cracked. Their lies unspooled.

And the stories—real stories—returned.

A girl who led an uprising and was erased for it.

A healer who saved a king and was renamed his servant.

A boy who spoke the future and was silenced before it could arrive.

In every city they passed, Rien gave back names.

"This is not rebellion," Elyra said softly one night, as the stars blinked like stitches in the heavens. "It's remembrance."

Kaelen nodded. "And that's what terrifies them."

Some feared the fire. Others feared the truths they buried—families lost not to war, but to redaction. Fathers who had vanished. Children who had never existed, though their mothers remembered them in dreams.

And then—they lit their own threads.

Threads that glowed with memory. With story. With pain reclaimed as purpose.

The fire spread faster than armies could.

In five weeks, six cities had remembered themselves.

By the seventh, the Loom finally moved.

The Loom Responds

Entire villages, once flickering with threadfire, fell dark overnight.

Vel returned from a scouting mission pale and cold, speaking of shadows stitched from forgotten prayers and Seamwrights wearing the faces of the newly remembered.

"They're rewriting faster," he said grimly. "They've stopped pretending to hide it."

"Then we stop pretending to run," Rien replied.

She turned to the map—a world of broken threads, fading names, and old scars.

The Fire We Bring