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Ashes of the First Flame

A novel by [Francis 9439]

For centuries, the world of Elaris has burned under the divine light of the First Flame, a sacred fire worshiped by the tyrannical Solar Dominion — a theocratic empire that claims godhood and unity through conquest. The Empress rules with holy fire and iron will, casting down cities that refuse her light, branding all who resist as heretics and rebels.

But across the shattered lands of the Free Marches, a spark of defiance refuses to die.

Kaelen Virelth, the exiled son of a disgraced noble house, is thrust into leadership after his brother is assassinated. Once a scholar and a pacifist, Kaelen becomes the reluctant face of a rebellion. As war spreads like wildfire, Kaelen must decide whether to become a killer to save the world — or lose everything he loves.

On the other side of the war, Serenya Valir, a devoted priestess of the Flame, begins to question the cost of blind faith. Sent to root out traitors within the Dominion, she uncovers dark secrets buried beneath sacred temples — and a prophecy foretelling a choice that will either redeem the world or end it in ash.

Amid the chaos rise other forces: the exiled Scorched Order, mage-knights blamed for a forgotten catastrophe; the elemental Aetherborn Tribes, whose magic the Dominion fears and hates; and the seductive spies of the Sable Garden, who pull strings behind every throne.

As old gods stir and ancient powers awaken, love blooms between enemies, loyalty crumbles into betrayal, and the line between salvation and damnation blurs. To stop the cycle of fire and ruin, someone must destroy the First Flame — or become its final bearer.

But power never dies quietly.

Ashes of  the First Flame

No creak. No groan. No show of force.

Just threads loosening, dissolving into strands of light as if embarrassed to be seen. One by one, they fell apart, until only an opening remained—tall, dark, pulsing with heatless power.

The air inside Caldrith Spire was thick—with memory, with silence, with something worse: intention. The walls pulsed like lungs. The stone beneath their feet rippled faintly, as though recalling a thousand footsteps that had never belonged to the same person twice.

Each level they climbed changed behind them.

Corridors folded in on themselves.

"This place is alive," Vel muttered. "Like the Loom itself is watching."

"It is," Elyra answered, not looking back. "It's trying to remember what it's supposed to be."

Hall of the Unwritten

They came to a chamber with no corners.

A perfect circle, filled with floating thread-scrolls. Each one glowed faintly, spinning slowly in the air. Some were bright, others dim, and a few were no more than smoke. Maerai stepped closer and gasped.

"These are people," she said. "Not books. Not stories. Potential."

"The Seamwright keeps futures here," Elyra murmured, eyes narrowing. "Ones he never allowed to happen."

Kaelen reached toward one scroll—but his hand passed through it like mist.

"You can't touch what never was," Lira whispered. "Only mourn it."

Rien's gaze settled on a single scroll—smaller than the rest. Dim. Fraying.

"That was me. The version that obeyed. That vanished."

Just a man in a robe woven of living threads, standing before a loom made of bone and fire. His face was plain. Young. Old. All at once.

"I've written you a thousand ways," he said as they entered. "Some heroic. Some tragic. All controlled."

"You've failed a thousand times," Rien replied.

"Not failed. Refined. You are the version I couldn't tame. The fray. The echo that kept burning. That makes you dangerous—but not inevitable."

He stepped aside, revealing the Loom behind him.

It hung in the air, massive, elegant, terrifying—its frame alive, its spindles turning not by hand, but by thought. Each thread hummed with a story, each knot a life.

"I can still fix you," the Seamwright said. "I can rewrite you."

The Vault-thread pulsed at her wrist.

The Flame Unleashed

Threads snapped from the Loom and lashed out.

One struck Lira, sending her sprawling.

Another coiled around Kaelen's leg, dragging him back.

She caught it midair, the Vault-thread in her hand flaring like a second sun.

"That thread—where did you find it?"

"It remembered before you forgot," she said.

The golden strand pierced the Loom itself.

"You don't understand what you're doing."

"You'll destroy everything—order, history—"

All around them, stories unspooled—forgotten names shouted into the void, erased wars redrawn, ancient griefs reclaimed.

The Loom tried to reweave itself—

But the Vault-thread pulsed again.

The Loom Without a Master

"It's not dead," she said. "It's free."

"We teach it to remember. The way we do. Messy. Painful. True."

The Spire’s Heart