Spartacus : Vance Legacy
Thomas Vance, 25, had it all: an inheritance from the world's wealthiest family, striking good looks, and unlimited access to luxury. However, his perfect life didn't end due to a grand conspiracy or a tragic illness, but because of a sports car he didn't buy for his ex-girlfriend on her birthday. A bullet ended his opulent world.
He awoke not in the afterlife, but in a sandy hell called Capua, in the unfamiliar world of the TV series Spartacus. From a lavish penthouse to a filthy slave cell, from designer suits to tattered rags, Thomas was thrown to the very bottom of the human food chain. He was weak, terrified, and destined to die under the harsh gladiator training.
Disclaimer: This is a fanfiction work. I do not own any rights to the original series/characters mentioned herein. All recognizable characters, settings, and plots belong to their respective creators. This story is written purely for enjoyment and no copyright infringement is intended. This story include mature themes, violence, or sensitive content. Reader discretion is advised. This is a creative work for fans, by a fan.
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So far I find it interesting ill be waiting for all future chapters 🙌
Only a short start but already I'm liking it. So few Spartacus stories so please continue. I want to see how the MC changes things especially with Crixus and later Spartacus. Please continue!
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The idea is brilliant, the execution is impressive, the plot isn't bending over backwards for mc, the whole thing is quite great, hope for more chapters....
Bonus release????
Just in case it motivates author to release bonus chapters
I enjoyed the story. Hope you continue with this and Don't drob this. .
After reading up to Arc 2 Chapter 3, I can confidently say this fanfiction has a lot of potential—especially if it continues in the right direction. Note: I’ve never watched the original series and this review translate from my original language, What’s Already Great: * The author’s habit of structuring each arc is a good trait for a writer. Many writers tend to lose focus and go off track after a while, so this planning helps maintain consistency. * The willingness to listen to feedback and improve based on it is a fantastic quality. In fact, it’s the main reason I felt motivated to write this review. * I appreciate how the protagonist doesn’t become overpowered too quickly, nor is he frustratingly weak. The balance is well-maintained, which I find very commendable. Areas for Improvement: * The story would benefit from more detailed descriptions of characters’ appearances—such as hair color, eye color, skin tone, and clothing. This would help readers visualize them more vividly, especially if the author plans to write more original work in the future. * Currently, the story doesn’t show much detail about how the protagonist develops his skills, aside from purchasing talents from the system. * The psychological aspect of the characters could be explored in greater depth. At the beginning of the story, it would be more believable if the main character’s mindset gradually shifted—from someone who’s lived a comfortable life to someone suddenly forced to survive day by day. For instance, during his first fight, he might move awkwardly at first but narrowly dodge an attack due to adrenaline. Then, over time, his combat skills could improve—like getting more familiar with weapons the next day, and eventually becoming proficient after a month (just an example). *To understand the character better, try imagining yourself in their position. Think: if you were suddenly forced into a life-or-death battle with no prior combat experience, how would you feel? Imagine using only your wits to dodge and exhaust your enemy before finally killing them. Then afterward, you suffer PTSD or vomit from the trauma of taking a life for the first time. Adding this kind of depth would make the character far more believable. ---
this novel has my full attention everytime a new chapter comes out keep up the good work gang
I enjoyed the story. Hope you continue with this......................................................................................................
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Simplemente increíble la cruda realidad de los tiempos antiguos, me gusta su sistema gracias a el, entro en acción rápido y con delicadeza para no agobiar a los que no son muy gustosos de esos temas[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
ciertamente me encanta como estas creando esta historia, la trama es interesante y entretenida tanto el desarrollo del protagonista como sus decisiones buscando surgir adelante entre astucia y habilidades me encanta sinceramente la historia espero sigas así y no dejes decaer esta obra que estas creando
Best Spartacus Fanfic i've ever read, please don't stop writing this.
I always wanted to read a story like this. And this was exactly what I had in mind. Thank you for this story Mr. Author. ——————— —————————- ——————————-