During his high school years, Walid Hasan becomes entangled in a horrifying string of student disappearances. The first victim? Onni — his childhood crush and the only girl he ever loved.
As more girls go missing and mutilated bodies begin to surface, the entire school sinks into fear. The police suspect a serial killer is hiding among them — maybe even someone from the school itself.
But Walid discovers the truth too soon.
He sees the killer’s face… and now, he’s being hunted.
Trapped in a deadly cat-and-mouse game, Walid can’t go to the police — and for some reason, the killer won’t kill him.
What secret ties them together?
And why does the killer keep whispering… “You’re not ready yet.”
One thing is certain:
Everyone’s hiding something.
And Walid might be the next body the school forgets.
Good stuff, keep it up bro. The mystery and the suspense aspects are great
I have put a lot of effort into this story and I hope you all love with the same intensity as me.
It’s an okay read if this is meant to be a short story. But if you plan to make it longer, it feels a bit empty. The suspense is there, but the characters lack depth—more like cardboard figures walking around. The story feels more like an outline than a fully developed piece. Also, the random shifts in perspective made it confusing to tell who was speaking. Not saying it’s bad—it just needs a little polishing. It has potential. Keep up the good work.
Wow bro, loved it. Keep going, can't wait to read more of it.