teravoll
TERAVOLL
“No one is born a monster.
But the world has a way of creating one.”
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Synopsis
Edie Spiwell is a quiet, broken boy—no home, no future, and nothing left to believe in.
Until he meets Hakan, a mysterious older boy who seems to understand him. But that friendship soon leads Edie into a world he’s never imagined—of missing memories, hidden truths, and a shadowy organization pulling strings behind the scenes.
As danger closes in and betrayal strikes from where he least expects, Edie begins to fall.
Not just from grace.
But from everything he thought was real.
Who is he, really?
And what will he become when everything is taken from him?
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Genres:
Dark Fantasy · Psychological · Identity · Betrayal · Coming-of-Age
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⚠️ Content Warning:
This story contains psychological tension, violence, and morally complex characters.
Recommended for mature readers seeking dark, emotional storytelling.
This story is good 👍 👌 that's all I can say, it could use some polishing and it could be better, the first chapter was really intriguing and I can't wait to read more
I can't rate this book a less than 5.0. the book is very captivating and intriguing, from the first chapter 😂😂. who told the boys that we don't do nicotine anymore 😂 and the way they sat to plot to deal with that university guy that insulted one of their own. i Love the way the story is going and the writing style is amazing
that was refreshing. been a long time i read some fresh new story. it hooked me up
The story is definitely an interesting one, something that is new among the many Webnovel stories—at least from the collection that I have read—and its concept wasn't overly used. But since it wasn't a familiar story. I suggest that you give an early focus to the world building so that it would be easy for the readers to visualize the kind of world or environment within the story. The writing quality is good, easy to read and understand. The only concern is it looks a bit like a script which Webnovel or rather editors don't favor. The characters are interesting and their dialogues as well. Overall, the novel has so much potential, so keep writing and upload more chapters.
honestly speaking, your book is so perfect and I love it
the story is good to say the least and intriguing to read, however it's quite fast paced and has a lot of characters and dialogues squeezed into one chapter. also, the writing style fluctuates between script-like style ( which i doubt is webnovel standard) and webnovel standard. all in all, its's great 👍
wow, at first I thought it was like Tokyo Revenger where there is no magic, hahah, then it starts talking about mana, then Eddie will Ed-dead. overall this book is great to read with logical pacing and consistent style of storytelling.
Gonna be honest the story is cool. world building is what it does the best it almost gives a kinda of fate mix with royal family webnovel vibes but I will say you should be a bit patient chapter 2 is were it really picks in terms of extra lore. so I'll give this a 7.5/10 if you have a low attention span but for the more patient viewer a 8.5/10
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