Has potential as long as the author does not make the mistakes he made with
his other a song of ice and fire fic
And I have one suggestion make him marry visenya targaryen
7 days ago
7
Bill_Smith_2424
For godsake don’t kill off original mc and replace with multiple mcs
7 days ago
7
Gourav_Murarka
A nice one. I await to see whether it can outpace your previous asoiaf fics. Still I recommend everyone to give it a read.
7 days ago
3
Ice_Phoenix1322
The mc is overpowered from the beginning. The character have no soul and act about as realistic as puppets. Wouldn’t really recommend.🫤🫤🫤
3 days ago
1
YouDontNeed2Know
Lets see if this one would be better than your previous two Asoiaf fics. Quite disappointing it would be if it turns oit to be copy & paste.
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7 days ago
1
The_man_The_myth
This person uses almost entirely ai to write his stories no point in reading
2 hours ago
0
Daoist7q065r
Очень пресный. Будто короткое содержание нежели целое произведение. Слишком имба, с самого начала. Прогресс слишком стремительный. Оттого не реалистично.
10 hours ago
0
kiritonaruto
please try to focus on magic here in this world building than science ok with it but things like guns is a big noo you should try getting inspiration from a different song a asoiaf fanfin in web novel tha guys world building is great
Has potential as long as the author does not make the mistakes he made with his other a song of ice and fire fic And I have one suggestion make him marry visenya targaryen
For godsake don’t kill off original mc and replace with multiple mcs
A nice one. I await to see whether it can outpace your previous asoiaf fics. Still I recommend everyone to give it a read.
The mc is overpowered from the beginning. The character have no soul and act about as realistic as puppets. Wouldn’t really recommend.🫤🫤🫤
Lets see if this one would be better than your previous two Asoiaf fics. Quite disappointing it would be if it turns oit to be copy & paste. ................ ...............
This person uses almost entirely ai to write his stories no point in reading
Очень пресный. Будто короткое содержание нежели целое произведение. Слишком имба, с самого начала. Прогресс слишком стремительный. Оттого не реалистично.
please try to focus on magic here in this world building than science ok with it but things like guns is a big noo you should try getting inspiration from a different song a asoiaf fanfin in web novel tha guys world building is great