IT only took one splash of rainwater and one perfectly delivered insult for Becky Blaze to crash into Dante Marcono’s life.
He’s dangerous, quiet, and absurdly rich. A cold-hearted heir with a smirk that could make kingdoms fall.
She’s the storm.
He’s the calm.
Until she grabs his collar and makes the world tilt.
Becky is loud, proud, and never backs down. Dante doesn’t do messy. But when her fire meets his ice, their world becomes anything but predictable.
One argument turns to obsession.
One glare becomes a challenge.
One moment in the rain becomes the start of everything.
She was never meant to be his.
But he’s already calling her mine
Your story is good and the pacing of your story is also good but there are some shortcomings that you should improve.
The plot is not unique, it is quite ordinary to be honest. However, the way you wrote it actually make it work. It's relaxing to read this type of novel. Wish you all the best! looking forwards to seeing u updating