The Fortune Paradox
Author: GioORRBeea
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A young detective, Silas Reynolds, finds himself entangled in the investigation of a missing girl. With no clues and time running out, he gets paired with junior investigator Adrian Morrow. But what begins as an ordinary case takes different turns when they find a weird hand clock that could change timelines.
Together, they travel through various timelines in search of the missing child. But the deeper they go, the more the lines blur between past and future, truth and illusion - and what they discover may change far more than just one life.
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I really liked the intruducion of characters and I hope we will meet new people in the next chapters aswell, it gives me cowboy bebop vibes,that are really good in my opinion. The only thing that I would change that is repeating the same verbs like how you said "Adrian was stubborn about this" and right after mention that Silas respected his stubborness. Ofcourse I am not an expert so do what you want Gio :sob:,but I think it would make it more enjoyable for the readers, atleast for me. I wish you luck writing the next chapters of The Fortune Paradox. Byebye for now !
pretty good storytelling with engaging characters.
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