Alright, I will rewrite and expand Chapter 10 in English, incorporating all your new details, especially about the Queen Mother's name, Rin's age, the enhanced dance
Chapter 10
Over the next few days, a peculiar rhythm settled between Ren and Rin – not quite friendship, but an unspoken pact. Each morning, Ren would make his way to Rin's chambers, and for hours, they would practice dancing. Ren patiently guided her through steps that felt natural and intuitive for him, and Rin, ever the genius, picked them up with astonishing speed. Her movements were now far more fluid and expressive than before, hinting at a new, unrevealed emotion within her. Even her mother, Queen Mother Seraphina, observed her progress, though she offered no direct words of praise. A subtle shift, almost imperceptible, was evident in her stern gaze.
In the evenings, they met on the palace's training grounds, where Rin taught Ren Earth magic. Rin's teaching style was direct and slightly rigorous, yet fair. Ren was an eager student, his eyes scrutinizing every move Rin made. She instructed him on how to feel the earth's energy, how to gather it in his palms, and then how to direct it to raise solid stones or even subtly tremor the ground at will. Ren quickly became proficient in the basic applications of Earth magic, and his rapid progress even impressed Rin, though she never openly admitted it.
Beyond their lessons, they began to understand snippets of each other. Rin no longer seemed as outwardly arrogant as she had on their first meeting; her walls had lowered ever so slightly. She shared brief insights into her tense relationship with her mother, how Queen Mother Seraphina expected perfection in everything, especially dance, given her own renowned past as a dancer. Ren didn't divulge the full truth of his past life, but he shared how he, too, had carried the burden of his family's expectations and was forced into an art form he had no interest in. These shared experiences forged a quiet understanding between them, an unspoken bridge that connected them, yet remained fragile.
One afternoon, as they concluded their lessons, Rin looked at Ren, a peculiar glint in her red eyes. "When's your birthday?" she asked directly.
Ren was slightly taken aback; it was a question he hadn't anticipated. "Mine? My birthday... I don't quite remember, but it's probably in a few months."
"You don't remember?" Rin narrowed her thin brows, a hint of genuine confusion in her voice. "Everyone knows their birthday."
"No, no, I mean, I know when it is, it's just... I never really cared that much," Ren said dismissively, memories of his indifferent past life floating through his mind. "It was never a big deal for me."
Rin said nothing more, but a clear thought flickered in her eyes, one that Ren didn't miss. A subtle shift crossed her face, making Ren feel as though he might have said something he shouldn't have.
Finally, the day of Princess Rin's 8th birthday party arrived. The palace glittered, adorned with colorful banners and shimmering lights that spoke of regal grandeur. Melodic music drifted through the air, and the joyous chatter of guests could be heard from afar. The entire Sun Kingdom was abuzz with festive excitement.
Ren, Luna, Arisa, and their parents gathered in the Grand Hall. The hall was magnificent, with gilded trim, colossal chandeliers, and walls inlaid with precious stones, showcasing the immense wealth of the palace. Tables groaned under the weight of an array of delicacies – roasted meats, exotic fruits, and decadent sweets, enough to satiate any appetite.
Ren sat alone in a corner, clutching a cup of juice, simply observing the throng. Memories of his past life, where he was always solitary, resurfaced. He felt uneasy amidst so many people, as if he were a creature from a different realm. I'm used to being alone, he thought. I've never been among so many people. It feels… strange.
Just then, his mother, Queen Mother Seraphina, approached him, a tender smile gracing her lips. "Ren, why are you sitting alone here? Go on, mingle with the people. It's a grand celebration."
Ren looked at his mother, then at the crowd, and remained silent. His mother sighed softly, gently patted his shoulder, and left him to his thoughts.
Moments later, a hush fell over the hall, gradually transforming into excited anticipation. From the upper levels of the palace, Rin descended, clad in a magnificent, silky pink gown intricately embroidered with gold. She looked more beautiful than ever, her red eyes and hair gleaming in the grand hall's lights. As she stepped down each stair, all eyes were fixated on her, as if time itself had paused.
She walked through the crowd, an inherent haughtiness in her stride, and took her place beside King Hikatsu and Queen Mother Seraphina. Her mother stood beside her, a familiar stern expression on her face, a stark contrast to the festive atmosphere, like a severe warning etched in stone.
King Hikatsu's voice boomed through the hall, "Distinguished guests, today marks the 8th birthday of my beloved daughter, Princess Rin! We gather tonight to celebrate her joy! And tonight, she will present a special dance performance for all of you."
Queen Mother Seraphina pulled Rin aside and whispered, her voice like cold steel, "Remember, Rin, no mistakes. Your reputation, and the reputation of this royal family, is at stake."
Rin lowered her eyes, but a faint, almost imperceptible smile touched her lips. She glanced across the hall at Ren, who offered her a confident smile, a silent encouragement.
The music shifted, and a soft, melodious tune filled the hall. Rin took her position, her face serious. A young prince, Prince Kaelen, from the neighboring Sky Kingdom, stepped forward. A charming smile played on his lips.
"Princess," Prince Kaelen bowed, "would you care to share the first dance with me?"
Rin looked at Prince Kaelen, then at her mother. She slowly nodded. "Very well, Prince Kaelen."
They began to dance. Rin, still tense, took the first step slightly wrong. Her movements were stiff and awkward. Prince Kaelen tried to support her, but during a complicated turn, Rin's foot slipped, and she lost her balance. She tumbled directly onto Prince Kaelen, and both crashed to the ground with a thud.
An unnatural silence fell over the hall, then hushed whispers began. "What's happening?" "The Princess can't even dance!" "How awkward!" "She's disappointed her mother." "She's supposed to be a genius, yet she can't do such a simple dance."
Queen Mother Seraphina's face flushed with anger, her hands clenched into fists. Prince Kaelen groaned in pain, trying to get up.
"It's alright, Princess," another prince, Prince Lyone, from the Southern Kingdom, stepped forward. His face was sympathetic, but a hint of cunning lurked in his eyes. "Prince Kaelen was a clumsy dancer anyway. You're good. Dance with me. We'll put on a splendid performance."
Rin, red-faced with embarrassment, nodded. She began to dance with Prince Lyone. This time, she was even more cautious, but the raw power within her betrayed her. During an intense spin, she applied a little too much force, and Prince Lyone didn't even realize what happened, but a sharp crack echoed. As they danced, his arm snapped.
Prince Lyone cried out in pain, his arm hanging limp. His fingers were bent at an unnatural angle. Everyone began to talk again, their whispers now louder and more alarmed. "Is she mad?" "She just broke a Prince's arm!" "Is she a princess or a monster?" "Why is she dancing when she clearly can't?"
Queen Mother Seraphina's face darkened further. Her fists were clenched so tightly that her nails dug into her palms. People were discussing Prince Kaelen and Prince Lyone, who were now being attended to by bodyguards.
Just then, a calm yet firm voice resonated through the hall. Ren, who had been sitting in the corner, had now stepped forward. There was an unusual confidence in his stride, his blue eyes fixed directly on Rin's red ones.
"Princess Rin," Ren said, his voice clear and rising above the murmurs. "Will you dance with me?"
A strange silence descended upon the hall. Everyone was stunned by Ren's unexpected move. Rin hesitated too, her red eyes scrutinizing Ren. She felt humiliated and defeated. But there was something in Ren's eyes—a quiet determination, an understanding—that compelled her to say yes. She slowly nodded. "Very well, Prince Ren."
Ren stepped forward and stood before Rin. He extended his hand. Rin's trembling hand gently met his. She was still nervous, her eyes downcast. The two previous failures had shaken her.
The music began anew, a slow, soulful melody. Ren gently took Rin in his arms. Rin's body was tense, her eyes closed, feeling the weight of her humiliation. She couldn't bring herself to speak to Ren, her mind blank.
Ren took a deep breath. "Princess," he whispered, his voice audible only to Rin. He gently took her by the waist. Rin flinched, her body tensing. Ren's blue eyes focused on Rin's closed ones. "Princess, look into my eyes. Just look at me."
Rin slowly opened her eyes. Her red eyes met Ren's blue ones. In those eyes, there was no judgment, no anger, only understanding and encouragement.
"Just do what I say," Ren said softly, a small smile on his lips. "Let your body flow. Trust me."
Ren slowly began to lead her, gently guiding her feet to the correct positions. Rin was still nervous, but there was a strange stability in Ren's hold that made her feel a little secure. As they continued to dance, Ren subtly began to use his Water Magic, concealed from everyone's view. Invisibly, tiny droplets of water floated in the air, creating a faint shimmer, like morning dew.
This shimmer hovered around them, dancing with their every move. No one realized it was magic; they simply thought it was the reflection of the hall's magnificent lights. This magic enhanced their dance, creating a magical aura. Rin gradually began to feel more confident. She looked into Ren's eyes and forgot all her nervousness. Their steps began to flow together, in a fluid, harmonious motion. They were no longer just a prince and a princess, but two souls connecting through the music.
Their dance was beautiful and flawless. All the guests' eyes were fixed on them, their whispers turning into murmurs of admiration. "This is incredible!" "The Princess dances so well!" "That Prince is amazing!" Queen Mother Seraphina's face, which had been dark before, was now slowly shifting to a mixture of surprise and subtle pride, though she tried to conceal it.
When the dance concluded, silence filled the hall, then a thunderous applause erupted, louder than ever before. Ren and Rin bowed, looking into each other's eyes, a faint smile on their faces.
Slowly, the party drew to a close. Guests, one by one, presented their birthday gifts to Princess Rin. Rin accepted each gift with a formal thank you, her expression calm and composed.
Luna presented her gift—a magnificent silk shawl woven with moon threads, exceedingly expensive. Rin accepted it.
Then it was Arisa's turn. She hesitated slightly, then offered a small, beautifully carved wooden bird. "This is a small gift, Princess," she said, a hint of trepidation in her voice. "I hope you like it." Rin accepted it as well, glancing at the bird for a moment, then fixing her eyes on Ren.
Finally, it was Ren's turn. He took the red diamond locket from his coat pocket. It rested beautifully on a thin silver chain, enhancing its crimson glow.
Ren stepped forward and stood before Rin. "This is for you, Princess Rin," he said, extending the locket towards her.
Rin looked at the locket, then into Ren's eyes. There was a peculiar glint in her eyes, a momentary recognition. She gently took it in her hand, her fingers tracing the diamond. "It's... it's very beautiful," she whispered. "Thank you, Ren."
She immediately put on the locket. The red diamond shimmered against her silky gown, perfectly matching her red hair and eyes. Ren breathed a sigh of relief. At least she liked it.
Rin accepted all the gifts, but her reaction to Ren's locket was slightly different, though she didn't show it much. Ren thought, Ugh, give some reaction! Say if it's good or bad, anything! But Rin's face remained composed.
After the party ended, all the guests retired to their rooms. Ren, too, with countless questions in his mind, returned to his room.
In another part of the palace, Rin was in her room, standing before a large mirror. She had changed out of her party gown and was now wearing a simple, soft white nightgown. Her eyes were fixed on her reflection in the mirror, but her attention was solely on one thing—the glowing red diamond locket around her neck. She kept touching it with her fingers; for a moment, her eyes softened, but then the familiar sternness returned.
Sometime later, Ren was lying in his bed, almost asleep, when there was a soft knock at his door.
"Who is it?" Ren whispered.
"Ren," a faint, almost whispered voice came. It was Rin.
Ren immediately got out of bed and opened the door. Rin stood before him, her red eyes gleaming in the darkness. She was still wearing the red diamond locket.
"Princess? Why are you here so late?" Ren asked, surprised.
Rin looked at him with her usual firm gaze. "Just follow me."
Ren hesitated but complied with Rin. They stealthily made their way through the palace corridors, avoiding the security guards, and finally exited through the back of the palace, where a dense forest began.
Reaching the edge of the forest, Ren was taken aback. A fight in the middle of the night in the forest? He noticed that Rin was still wearing the locket, and it pleased him that she had at least worn it.
Rin turned and looked at Ren, a strange glint in her eyes that was full of challenge. "Ren," she said, her voice now firm. "You're leaving for your kingdom tomorrow morning anyway, so I want to fight you now. I want to defeat you. Let's have a match!"
Ren was shocked. What? A match at midnight? Why does she want to fight now?
"What's wrong? You don't want to fight?" Rin asked, the same old arrogant smile returning to her face as she looked at him with piercing eyes.
Ren took a deep breath, a thrill awakening within him. "Alright, let's do it!" he said, his voice filled with enthusiasm. "Besides, I'll get to practice the new magic I've learned! Let's do it then!"
Both stood facing each other, the night forest silent around them, awaiting the impending confrontation.