Fate/InHuman
Ok it's my first time writing a synopsis so I'll try my best and NO THIS IS NOT A TRANSLATION:
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Humans become either good or evil through the process of learning. However that rule is not absolute.
There are rare moments of goodwill shown by evil men.
There are bad intentions shown on a whim by a saint.
This contrast is what makes humans into humans.
But ultimately at the beginning of it all, the only truth they know is the existence of truth.
This is the story of a kid born in this world with absolutely nothing to call his own, unable to understand his surroundings and the people around him.
While not so much at the beginning this is ultimately HIS story. During this time he will meet many people and see many things.
He will struggle to undertsand the things happening around him and will most likely not be able to succeed at everything he tries.
His life started changing after meeting a man who is more greedy than anyone else, is more vocious than anyone else, more arrogant than anyone else and the list goes on and on. And well............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ the rest is in the story so maybe you should think about reading it
Shmaless review from the author of this you will all hopefully read. It's not a translation I made it all myself. Please leave reviews and share your thoughts on it. This isn't a standard fate story as it's more me starting byt trying to tell a story of my own in a way
As someone who beta-read this, I can only say one thing. ABSOLUTE PEAK. ACTUAL PEAK. Even though my beta-reading work was dubious at best. Now details, Writing Quality; There's little to no mistakes whatsoever in the writing itself, actually it even resembles the source material in the way it's written, as in, the type of writing Fate LNs tend to have. There's a select few grammar errors that rarely ever occur but the guy's quick to fix them so no wrries on that end either. The scenes are well-crafted, and the writing is engaging, I usually read stuff with 20 breaks or some in between but with this, even that didn't happen. Update Stability; Can't say anything about this for now, but the chapters written to date have a decent consistency to them. It's not daily, like the usual webnovel stuff, but at this level of quality, you really can't be asking for that. Story Development; This is the strongest point of this work. The plot is a wholly original Grail War set some time after the actual one and BY GOD it feels like it's an actual addition to the Fate series instead of a fanfiction. We have some new additions, a lot of familiar faces. He's literally writing a new grail war folks, I don't know what else you need to hear for development. Every single character so far adds something, instead of just being flair. Character Design; The characters from the originals have portrayed completely faithfully, and the few new additions are extremely exciting to follow. Even the MC's dynamic with his servant is endearing in a way, makes you smile like an idiot at times. The other Masters also mesh REALLY well with their servants, which holds true to the compatibility factor many fics choose to conveniently ignore. It's really amusing to read their interactions with one another. World Background; Fate is honestly troublesome when it comes to this particular bit, but the author and I share a singular braincell and he's done deep lore dives into the OG materials instead of just wiki-surfing and acting like a know-all... unlike a certain someone. No issues on this end yeah. Tldr; it's actual peak. Anyone who thinks otherwise will have beef with me and it will be ON SIGHT. I honestly wish I could consistently write this well.
Peak fiction, amazing characters, great world building, no ai slop, not a badly translated fic, good plot but it’s kinda slow however cooking takes time. Gilgamesh glazing 100%. All I see is potential!
I ain't going to glaze alot all i could say is these fic is pretty good webnovels is getting boring these days there only a bit of stories that are actually good and these is one of them
Honestly, I'm very much enjoying this story. This isn't a self insert or op harem story. Nah, it' a story with 2 characters a Kid and a Servant and one will try to change the other and maybe he will be changed as well. I can't wait to see where it will go.
A new fate fic that’s actually good and explains stiff for new readers unfamiliar with Fate, and an author that listens and is actively taking suggestions and trying to improve, unlike the hundreds others on this godforsaken site. What more can you want? Read it
its just good,its somehow not a translation,this guy knows how to cook,so read this unless you want the chinese transmigrator with a system to visit you
Its great, gilg as a summon done good is hard enough but this seems to nail it. The mc is… well, honestly he alone would probably become stale fast considering he literally has no personality, but with gilg in the mix, and vonsidering his reaction to the dream cycle, it becomes very interesting. All the side characters seem fleshed out too, and im hyped to see how the story with the whole „a grail war but also not a normal one“ will develop.
It is a fire book! decently length of chaos and good story telling and having an original plot, shit's peak on god, read it as if you would the bible for it is a religious text! *Alright ... I've done what you've asked for, mêle.... now can you p-please let my family go?... what? but we had a deal! you promised!!! no...NO....NOOOO—!*
No-yuri