The Useless Extra Knows It All....But Does He?

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author is playing game by stating 'other' instead fl in illustrations 😭

will loraine will be in harem any clue ???????????it gud novel btw........................................................................................................................................................

A good story with good pacing. Just don't make mc dense in romance.

for a new and upcoming story this one is actually pretty good, give it a try

The story is great and emotionally engaging

So far the story seems promising. The mc isn't perfect and needs to work in order to become stronger without getting handouts from a system.

Honestly for it being your first novel it’s down so well from story to the world building in just under 100 chapters is insane. At the pace it’s going it’s going to be most definitely one of most favorite web novel I’ve read😭. Ps: Are you planning to make a discord?

This starts like any other hero party versus demon king story (you know, like those anime?!), everyone dying, abruptly like a cruel joke. The hero reliving the same sequence over and over, friends dying, it's the definition of insanity to have to do something the same way every time. It would be the most traumatizing thing ever to have to keep reliving the same deaths of the same friends over and over, even if you knew it wasn't real. The author makes this clear and upsetting. BUT THEN, you find out it's just a video game lol! and just as abruptly you figure out he's in the game as an NPC. What it does well: The world-building is pretty good; the author describes many different places within the game, and just as quickly, they explain the three types of combat classes. The writing quality is good, the updates are daily, that's awesome. The character design is decent-ish. I can say there are some drawbacks to the character backgrounds; they are a tiny bit cliche, but there are only so many combinations of how a person's life is. I can appreciate how the author integrates his feelings into the story and the emotional nuance behind the main character's background, and the blessing it was to be isekai-ed. The book also dives into multiple points of view about the game's world, where we learn more about what other characters are thinking, not just the main character. The fighting is more realistic, since the main character does not have the real skill of a sword fighter; he fights clumsily, but he gains experience. It's really interesting to see from the main character's perspective what choices he potentially made wrong when the story world was just a game versus him having to live in it. What's cliche, but works: Which kind of feels a little cookie-cutter, but if you're reading it for the type of story where a person is reincarnated/possessing another person's body in another world (isekai), it is what you're here for. It's a typical isekai where the main character is a loser and then becomes an underdog in the new world. Overall, it's a great story, it's an interesting spin on an isekai where a person gets sent into a game, and has no idea how to move forward, and knows if they die it's game over.

I like to give 5 stars for new stories 😁 I wonder if the mc will have a system? Honestly, the transmigration story with a system is very common, but if the story is unique and good, it will be a diamond.

Haven’t read too many chapters so maybe some things change, though I’ve read a lot of novels with a very similar setting that don’t. I can’t understand why the author made the MC like that. First, that personality falls flat in novel format. Second, the MC is supposed to defeat the unmatched devil emperor, so the MCs personality ruins the prestige of all other characters. Third, this type of self degradation and bumbling clown MC comedy doesn’t belong in a story that’s not mainly a comedy(imo). This novel has some defects(imo) of similar novels. Characters that the all knowing MC knows well, but they unexpectedly have an interest in the MC for a reason that doesn’t fit. Multiple powerhouses and important characters seem to know something about the MC and have unshakable confidence, but in the game/novel the MC read, the calamity succeeds and they know nothing. The all-knowing MC can’t take advantage of his knowledge about characters because he’s too foolish and cowardly, so he is instead pushed around by everybody. The all-knowing MC underestimates enemies he’s fully prepared for. There’s only been one fight that I’ve read, but it reminds me of the trend that other similar novels have. Hopefully, this won’t be another novel where every battle is very close and often requires the MC to improve his strength mid battle or get lucky.

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The setting of the world and how the mc comes into that place, him being one of the last players were explained well. I think the sentence structure could be better executed. Like in fast paced action, short, rapid, three worded sentences work really well. But in a scenario where the mc is waking into the new world, I think the sentences could be a bit longwinded, to show that he is confused. This gives room to slow down the pacing. Also, spaces after fullstops. Take care in looking into that. The story develops quite well in the first chapter itself. Let's see how it all pans out.