Born in the night under a scarlet moon that had never shone so brightly, Sirius Altharys aims to revive his grandfather, who died when Sirius was fifteen, but he never expected to be a part of the Great War for the Throne.
This story has a lot of potential. The writing flows well and easy to follow, besides some little tidbits I see no major faults with the grammar. I can't say too much of the main character as we haven't really seen anything as of yet. The world and foreshadowing is well, I am invested.
I hope to see more chapters!
This story has a lot of potential. The writing flows well and easy to follow, besides some little tidbits I see no major faults with the grammar. I can't say too much of the main character as we haven't really seen anything as of yet. The world and foreshadowing is well, I am invested. I hope to see more chapters!