Iris, a 21-year-old orphan from the modern world, is murdered and awakens in the body of Salira Hasrima—the infamous red-haired villainess from her favorite novel. But Salira’s life is anything but glamorous. Abused, rejected, and ultimately killed for her jealousy, Salira was doomed. But not anymore.
Iris is determined to rewrite Salira’s fate—by marrying the 'extra' prince Adam, building a kingdom where women rise as warriors and scholars, and maybe... being loved as herself. But fate isn’t so easy to fool, and the story might be over sooner than she thinks.
What happens when the villainess becomes the ruler of a new World?
⚠️ WARNING:
Reading my stories may cause:
Sudden emotional trauma
Existential crises
Uncontrollable crying, yelling, or wall-staring
Binge reading even when you swore you'd stop
Hearing glitchy sounds that aren’t actually there
Trust issues with every character (and maybe the author too)
A deep need for answers you’ll never get
Read at your own risk. You’ve been warned.
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AUTHOR’S MELTDOWN WARNING
Bro.
I am writing this at 2 A.M.
My eyebags have their own bloodline.
I am sacrificing sleep, sanity, and brain cells so Iris can get chased by a sword-happy husband in a corset.
AND YOU WON’T EVEN DROP A POWER STONE???
Comment. Like. Vote.
Or I swear by the demon ink gods, I will stop publishing.
I will vanish into the system like Salira’s soul.
You’ll be left with a cliffhanger so deep, even Adam can’t save you.
Saw your post on Reddit and figured I’d give your story a try. It was a nice, quick read — really enjoyable. Thank you for sharing it, because you gave me some valuable insight that I can apply to my own writing, so I genuinely appreciate it. I could tell as I read thr story that your descriptions and writing improved as the story went on. The characters were solid, especially Adam — total chad. I also loved how Iris basically became an engineer by stealing her body 😭. my favorite part was the wedding part where she ripped her dress. These are really interesting concepts and story development. That said, I think there are a few areas where you could go a bit deeper. For example, the worldbuilding — maybe I missed some details, but I felt it could have been fleshed out a little more. The same goes for the inner conflicts. And about the system I got a little confused. Is the system supposed to be us, the viewer? Or is it more like a system where she levels up her traits? Either way, I really enjoyed it. It wasn’t bad at all — in fact, it’s quite good once you get into it. Just keep writing, even if it feels like no one’s reading. Quick note: the “views” you see on your novel are actually impressions. They’re not views on individual chapters, but rather how many times your cover has popped up on someone’s screen. yeah, with that being said, if you ever want someone to talk to about novels and writing in general, don't hesitate to send me a message. I'll be glad to make another friend!
i am genuinely rating my book, it may not be the best but i love it, maybe give it a try?
I love itttttt!! the fact that this is my first story since I downloaded web novel it did not disapoint! it's hard to find such stories in any other reading platform! keep it up web nove! I highly recommen!