He how you doing I like the story but if he take to rika I fell like it will make the story bad because I think the whole point if for him to struggle to get powerful not to to take something I will make him op right when he get it
16 days ago
6
interman
Saw this edit and thought it would fit perfectly into the story of jjk feel free to use it if you want.
The dragon has three heads.
One to be a murderer who will unleash death. (Sukuna)
One to be a monarch whose crown will weigh heavy. (Tengen)
And one to be mad, whose ideas will change history. (Kenjaku)
7 days ago
1
Inferno_Master
This is a good fanfic , plz don't make the mc loose humanity and become emotional emplty killing machine , he is selfish bcz he want to survive, and he is a bit of paranoid which is acceptable, but make him bond with people he is a tramigrator with no connection in this world
He came to this world and was scared how will he survive, now if he is getting powerfull let him make connection and so that he fell connected and not be a a edgy emo kid that is maniacal and a killing robot,
Jujutsu user are crazy and being a bit crazy don't hurt , just don't make the character insane and a emotionless killer and a selfish who kill his friend and will only crave power .
10 days ago
1
t650825t
mc is realistic and survivel
goooooooooooooooooooooooood
10 days ago
1
Lensian15
It's great and it has immense potential. The author cooks well Chapters feel short...................................................................
16 days ago
1
Daniel_Fernandes_7902
written by artificial intelligence 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
5 hours ago
0
dobrinas_m
Amazing, one of the better JJK fanfic on here
a day ago
0
Death_Knight_
I love it
how the mc react to the world of jjk,
The story development from becoming strong by detailed plans
Everything, good job bro.
a day ago
0
GodPisLayer
the beginning is quite meh, but over time the story gets really good, I recommend you read it.
3 days ago
0
TyrantKing_Antares
Writing Quality: Really good, it falls in the 1% of webnovel fics that have decent quality without any errors (that I have found). There IS a bit of the AI-ness there, though that could just be because the Author used it to proofread or I've read way too many Chinese raw MTLs. Could be either.
Stability of update: seems good. Can't say the same thing for Alien Evolution System. PLEASE DOEVER UPDATE IT PLEASE!!!!!... Anyway, like I said, very good.
Story Development: Again, it's good. I have many MANY questions and simply don't like some things, but from a general perspective, it's good.
Character Design: Why does this even exist? free points bro.
World Background: It's JJK, what did you expect? Also, my gloriously hedonistic beloved GOATkuna solos all of you Limit(ed)ess Giggers, GOATkuna >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Boundless tier characters.
I would definitely recommend reading.
5 days ago
0
tweaked_genesis
This story actually makes you believe the mc has a brain and the power to use it. He doesn't start op or with unlimited ce, he builds himself up from basic. At the start he was not even able to sense ce but he progressed, not unnaturally but actually put in work. You have a creative mind Mr.Author.
8 days ago
0
Dreams_Reader01928
Author you are cooking 🧑🍳, so many chapter you uploaded
8 days ago
0
interman
it's solid work and I can definitely recommend it.
8 days ago
0
Dreams_Reader01928
It good, read it then complain if you find any problem, personally l like it, author made with something in mind a goal, and it’s very good fan fic
He how you doing I like the story but if he take to rika I fell like it will make the story bad because I think the whole point if for him to struggle to get powerful not to to take something I will make him op right when he get it
Saw this edit and thought it would fit perfectly into the story of jjk feel free to use it if you want. The dragon has three heads. One to be a murderer who will unleash death. (Sukuna) One to be a monarch whose crown will weigh heavy. (Tengen) And one to be mad, whose ideas will change history. (Kenjaku)
This is a good fanfic , plz don't make the mc loose humanity and become emotional emplty killing machine , he is selfish bcz he want to survive, and he is a bit of paranoid which is acceptable, but make him bond with people he is a tramigrator with no connection in this world He came to this world and was scared how will he survive, now if he is getting powerfull let him make connection and so that he fell connected and not be a a edgy emo kid that is maniacal and a killing robot, Jujutsu user are crazy and being a bit crazy don't hurt , just don't make the character insane and a emotionless killer and a selfish who kill his friend and will only crave power .
mc is realistic and survivel goooooooooooooooooooooooood
It's great and it has immense potential. The author cooks well Chapters feel short...................................................................
written by artificial intelligence 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
Amazing, one of the better JJK fanfic on here
I love it how the mc react to the world of jjk, The story development from becoming strong by detailed plans Everything, good job bro.
the beginning is quite meh, but over time the story gets really good, I recommend you read it.
Writing Quality: Really good, it falls in the 1% of webnovel fics that have decent quality without any errors (that I have found). There IS a bit of the AI-ness there, though that could just be because the Author used it to proofread or I've read way too many Chinese raw MTLs. Could be either. Stability of update: seems good. Can't say the same thing for Alien Evolution System. PLEASE DOEVER UPDATE IT PLEASE!!!!!... Anyway, like I said, very good. Story Development: Again, it's good. I have many MANY questions and simply don't like some things, but from a general perspective, it's good. Character Design: Why does this even exist? free points bro. World Background: It's JJK, what did you expect? Also, my gloriously hedonistic beloved GOATkuna solos all of you Limit(ed)ess Giggers, GOATkuna >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Boundless tier characters. I would definitely recommend reading.
This story actually makes you believe the mc has a brain and the power to use it. He doesn't start op or with unlimited ce, he builds himself up from basic. At the start he was not even able to sense ce but he progressed, not unnaturally but actually put in work. You have a creative mind Mr.Author.
Author you are cooking 🧑🍳, so many chapter you uploaded
it's solid work and I can definitely recommend it.
It good, read it then complain if you find any problem, personally l like it, author made with something in mind a goal, and it’s very good fan fic
honestly peak .