Star Wars: New Age

Hello everyone. This is the shameless review from the author. Now there is something I want to clarify. If you see something that makes no sense to you, let me know and I'll try to explain as much as possible why I went with the decision in the episode that you didn't understand. Thank you,

Finally, something of quality, with logical and sensible word building. Even though the writing is a bit poetic, it does not interfere with the story. I read the entire story in one night ... pls continue this :)

I think it's a great start. To be honest hyper-realism is a very likely development for future VR entertainment so it makes sense for a game like that to get created. at the same time seems lile a set-up for essentially cross-universal insertion. Anyway, honestly, great execution so far from my POV, writing is solid, no overused tropes and plenty of intrigue and set-up for the future, but honestly feels a bit heavy in terms of importance of his discovery given he's just one of millions of players. Could've been something that didn't have to rely on an accident, but that he discovered gradually from some weird cryptic events on the planet of his destination.

so far, this is awesome. I really hope you keep this going. I love how it's "not a game" but a new reality. Will we see gaming aspects come into it?