Devilbane: The Broken Demon Heir Emerges As Monarch

Hey you.., yeah you, what are you looking at, the person who is reading this, ahhh... You, listen this is a self review which at first I thought lets not do it, but here I am. So, the story is going great more than I thought when visualizing it. The Characters are cool more to come, the story is gonna get heavy. One thing I promise is that once you complete first 2 chapters, there is no going back. If you are a true Fantasy Adventure book lover, this novel is specially written for you. If you are not don't mind the above line that was gaslighting and read the first 2 chapters, you will come back and say, no sht, author is cooking XD

To be honest, the chapters are turning out truly rich and engaging. The writing keeps getting better with each one. This is just the beginning, but you can already see the potential for an epic and magnificent story.

Loved the plot and the intensity, I'm interested in where the story is going now. The pacing is absolutely great. I love how Garen Vale interactions are went with the MC.

It gets better with each chapter, and the atmosphere makes me want to read more and more. Highly recommended! I look forward to more chapters [img=strong]

I really enjoyed the first chapter, it is very well written. I was a little surprised that the tone shifted so dramatically in the second, but I am not concerned as I like that change. The historical themes are quite fun, not something you see very often so I can't wait to see where it goes.

Now to start things off, I recognize that there are only 5 chapters at the moment, but it seems like it has the ingredients for a really good story. First off, that starting scene really draws you in, reading like it takes place in the distant future. Grammar-wise, there are no concerns, it reads like an experienced author wrote this. I personally liked how the first chapter went, really hooking you with action. Some things that I felt concerned me were some unique creative choices to separate sections, so I think they could be improved somewhat to make it easier to follow along. Other parts felt weird, like bold dialogue, which might be enhanced by doing all caps or italicizing when necessary. I don't want to spoil anything too much, but I highly recommend you check it out and give it a read. You can't lose anything by giving it a chance, and you stand to gain everything by doing so! :)

This one’s a slow burn, but in a good way. The atmosphere is thick, and there’s a sense that every little detail matters. The characters aren’t fully open yet, but that just adds to the intrigue. Feels like the calm before the storm and I’m here for it.

Okay, this is way better than I expected. From the first chapter, it just pulls you in. The world feels real, the characters are layered, and there’s this underlying tension that makes it hard to stop reading. I already have theories, and I need to know what happens next. If the rest of the book keeps this up, it’s going to be a favorite for sure.

I am not just giving 5 stars for the sake of it....This book has good grammar and we get 2 chapters daily, story is awesome and doesn’t have obvious plot holes.....author is doing a great job in character building and the MC’s character looks real...... Now, this novel is not the same as other cliche system novels....

I didn’t expect to be drawn in so quickly. The vibe is subtle but gripping, and even though not a lot has happened yet, it still holds your attention. The characters feel like they’re hiding something, and the world has this quiet weight to it. I’m definitely curious.

Not gonna lie, Right after the first awesome hook, it took me a minute to get into the flow, but once I did, something about it just stuck. The setting feels real without trying too hard, and the characters are slowly pulling me in. It’s not overly dramatic yet, but you can sense things are building. I’m not sure where it’s going, but I kinda want to find out.