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When Eveline Thorne inherits the crumbling estate of Greymoor, she doesn’t expect the house to remember her — or worse, mistake her for someone she’s never met.

Within its ivy-clad walls and timeworn mirrors, another version of herself lingers: Lady Eveline Harrow, a woman long dead… or not dead enough. Bound by memory, regret, and a curse that unravels time itself, Eveline is drawn into a loop of déjà vu, haunting dreams, and love that defies logic.

At the heart of it all is Rowan, a man tethered to both timelines, hiding truths behind soft eyes and silent goodbyes. As Eveline unravels the threads of her past life, she must choose whether to break the hour that binds them — or become the very ghost she fears.

A tale of echoes, fractured selves, and the hour that won’t let go.

The Gilded Hour

By noon, it had swallowed the gardens whole. Trees blurred into silhouettes, statues looked like watchers from another world, and the golden mist clung to the glass like breath.

Eveline stood at the threshold, barefoot on cold stone. The roses were gone from her pillow. The watch no longer ticked.

Rowan had vanished, but someone else had returned.

She stepped outside. The mist parted around her like memory recoiling.

At the edge of the gravel path stood a woman in a violet gown, untouched by time. Her veil fluttered like a breath held too long.

And when she lifted her face, Eveline felt her bones remember.

They stared at each other—two selves, two eras, two hearts bruised by the same man and same hour.

"Why now?" Eveline asked. "Why return?"

"Because you finally opened the door."

Lady Harrow tilted her head. Her voice was velvet, cut with iron.

"I did what love demanded. And love, my dear, is not always kind."

"That wasn't love," Eveline said. "It was possession."

"It was desperation. I gave up everything to keep him—time, life, name. I shattered myself to hold onto him. What have you ever sacrificed?"

Eveline felt the answer twist inside her like glass.

"No," she said. "I lost him willingly."

The fog swirled around them. Behind Lady Harrow, the shape of the house shifted—older now, darker, like it remembered its first mistress.

"You want to become me," Harrow said. "You've always felt it. The pull. The ache. The memory that didn't belong to you."

"It never belonged to you either," Eveline said. "It belonged to Rowan. And you twisted it."

The wind picked up. The clocktower began to chime—once, twice, three times…

By the sixth chime, the world around them shimmered.

"It's the gilded hour," Harrow said. "Our hour."

"You can't save him. He's already part of the house. Part of me."

"Then I'll tear the house down," Eveline said.

Suddenly, the roses around the path withered. The sky cracked with thunder—not from above, but beneath the earth.

The Sixth Hour wasn't just a time.

"You feel it, don't you?" Harrow stepped closed. Her voice softened.

"That quiet longing. That ache beneath your skin. That's me. You were made from my grief."

"No," Eveline said, breathless. "I was made from what you couldn't destroy."

The house shuddered. Glass shattered upstairs. Eveline ran—past the trembling walls, through the rooms that echoed with voices not her own.

She climbed to the study. Rowan's coat lay draped on the chair. A feather was tucked between the pages of the diary.

And there, in the mirror—not cracked now, but glowing—was Rowan.

"Rowan!" she cried, placing her palm to the glass.

He looked up, eyes dull with memory. "I didn't mean for this."

"She was beautiful when she loved. Terrifying when she lost."

"Now she's waiting. For you to finish what she began."

Eveline turned—and found Harrow behind her, veiling lifted.

Tears ran down both their faces. They were the same.

"Let me in," Harrow whispered. "One moment. One hour. Let me feel him again."

"If I let you in," Eveline asked, " will you leave?"

"If you don't," Harrow said, "we will both disappear."

And Eveline stepped into the mirror.

Chapter 14: Where the Mirror Breaks