
William watched his family get slaughtered at the dawn of the Apocalypse.
A demon placed his brother’s beating heart on his lap before death claimed him.
For reasons unknown to him, he woke up inside a novel with a strange and powerful system bound to him.
"For all the demons in existence, I will become their End"
"And for those who brought apocalypse, I will become their apocalypse"
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Extra Tags: #cultivation #magic #apocalypse #elements #Romance #violence #Dragons #elves #pheonixes #beasts #bloodlines #bloodboiling #weak to strong #demons #demonhunting #multiverse #universe #cheats #fastpaced
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HAREM INFO:
#no Yuri and no incest, not NTR, not all women will be part of MC's harem.
Some heroins are obsessed with mc.
Romance is not the main focus of the story.
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What a gem of a book! I’ve been binge reading for the last week and I’m currently up to chapter 166. The story is well thought out, the world building is vivid and the characters are so well developed that I’m emotionally attached to some of the side characters. It’s amazing what this author has done with the place of this book, it takes its time and builds everything structurally while not neglecting the big fight scenes or progressing the MCs power. This in my opinion could have easily been published as a litrpg novel, Webnovel doesn’t deserve you author! One of the best reads I’ve had in a very long time, can’t wait to see what happens next. Also for these who are worried about the R18 content, there has literally been nothing explicit thus far in the story, there is exactly one chapter with a make out scene and thats about it. Highly recommend giving this one a try.
This is one of the top masterpieces I've ever read. The writing is genuine. I can feel the hard work poured by the author to make this. Or maybe he is just simply intelligent. I don't know. I've read so many novels before. And this work is one of very few I would like to read over and over. I hope the author will live a good, long, healthy, wealthy life until old time. And in his prime he could create more legendary, mythic, and divine works to inspire us, even more...
It deserves 5 stars at everything. Story is peak, romance is good and updates are like at least 2 chapters a day or more. I only hope that author can make this novel at least 2000 chapters long
hey i am back better than ever with a new book. I hope you like it and make it yours, like you all did with my last book.
Much system. Very OP. If you want a fast- paced cultivation novel with an overpowered mc, a snarky system, and an unhealthily obsessed female fan club / future harem then this is the book for you. The author has crafted a fantastical world with a solid magic system and a captivating plot. I have thoroughly enjoyed the journey so far. The author isn't perfect. There are some spelling and grammar errors, and some incorrect word choices, but relatively low given that Webnovel writers don't have real editors. There are a few extremely minor plot inconsistencies and a few places where it feels like I'm missing something. That said the author is extremely engaging with the audience, which I enjoy. The future harem characters are currently a little 2 dimensional, but that might just be due to early story development. Most of them have only just recently met the mc and become obsessed due to one reason or another (fortunately it's not otherworldly handsomeness). The harem member with the most story time so far is showing some promise, though it would be nice to see more of her personality outside of her feelings for William.
Loving it till now an OP Mc , very good story and world building just hoping it has harem and good relationship with them just not collecting them as pokemon and hope so author writes R-18 chapter
i don't like the system, 1 free purchase a month without restriction is too much that should have been a 1 time thing. binding people and gaining their cultivation x 100 is just lazy. having access to a shop were you can gain everything for an appropriate price is cheat enough the rest should depend on the mc.
Overall quite mediocre, a few things that were REALLY annoying tho & a main thing of the systems personality being amazing terrible
So far, I have read up to Chapter 105. The story pacing and development is progressing very nicely. The Mc is overpowered and has not been nerfed. The romance is slowly developing with a few characters with their own pace, no intimacy yet, but that works since Mc has his own goals to focus on. While the story is fast-paced, it hasn't been rushed, and it doesn't have huge time skips for power, which is a nice change of pace. There are some time skips, but trust me, they only pertain to the Mc. I currently have high hopes for this novel, especially because the author is very interactive with criticism and feedback. The author has done a great job of not changing things to fit specific readers but also correcting mistakes when pointed out. So, in short, the author cares about the story so the development won't suffer. It's a very fun novel and I hope more people can read it.
one of the best on this platform ...has a striking similarity to one of the novels i read in the past but better in many aspects ..
I love the story a lot it’s the 3 book since I started reading that gained my full support
Good book👍 Story moves at a good pace to never be boring. The OP ability of the main character is unique enough to make it memorable. To author: I can see some character development in the pipeline. Don’t rush it, but don’t ignore it (the “blood pressure”). I haven’t seen it in the most recent chapters, but you don’t need to put an “A/N” every time you make reference to past events/plot points. Trust in your readers at least pay the minimum attention. Side tangent: One thing that has always stuck with me, was a quote that I can never repeat correctly. To sum it up though; Make sure you deliver on promised plot. If you feel the need to expand on a side story, make sure it has a point to make or promise to fulfill. I’ve seen authors get caught up in wanderlust of their own making. As the plot sits at the side, almost forgotten. Right now we have a couple of what I’ve called “promises”. Obviously, kill all demons and the one behind them. A big one, at time of review, is the mom plot. You dangle that in front, and then threw in an academy arc. So make sure the academy has a promise to fulfill. One that will make us excited to see how it plays out, instead of an obstacle between mc and mommy. One vague promise is the spaceship. That implies that we may leave the planet at some point. Either address that the plot won’t leave planet, or keep in mind that there is more out there. I’m sure I’ve miss one or two. Anyway, good book. I look forward to more.
This novel hit hard right from the start, especially the apocalypse opening and William’s trauma. The MC is OP but not boring, his character feels different, and the world-building is done nicely without lazy clichés. I liked how the system and stakes are handled, and the pacing keeps things intense. Overall, it’s a solid read and definitely worth continuing if you enjoy dark apocalypse stories.
I didnt mind this story all the way up till you have a really high up character who was imprisoned for a very long time.. She gets saved by someone and when shes getting her powers back she walks right into a trap without letting the guy who save her know? Nah thats just stupid, I cant read a cliche novel. So stupid, No more support from me anymore. It wasnt a bad read until it turned into another cliche novel.. Its like all these authors are copy and paste from each other and its terrible. Can we get new authors? Like really.. Smh.
okky i will be brutally honest with this novel. the novel is not bad to be honest . it has got amazing world building, characters, story. the novel has a lot of potential . but what make this novel sucks is that the author is not good at executing his words . the quality of the novel is good but what I mean by execution is that : there are unnecessary and over explaining certain aspects in this novel such as even describing a small scene the author takes a whole big paragraph . and the next important is that the emotions of these character and what they experience is just written in plain language. what I mean by that is that the author can't get the readers to feel the emotion of the characters or any action scenes. well thats all , other than this the novel is pretty much good.
This is Solo Leveling, but a million times better and well-written. Give it a try and you'll love it (Coming from a system hater btw). In search of Gold, I found Diamond. Author don't fumble the writing quality gng, this is one of the best novels I've read so far.
it started off good, i liked the story but after some chapters, there's just too much about cultivation and techniques and isolation, i wish if there was more human interaction, more companions, more fights... that would have been really fun Author