MHA: I'm the Reality Warping 'Hero X', but I'd Rather Have a 9-5 Job

i dont know why these shite worthless ai storys are being normalized in webnovel my goat is washed i remember prime webnovel

13 chapters of the same thing... Writing quality isn't bad, but it has ai, but it's kt really noticeable. Just really frustrated. I thought I was getting some action and cool fights. I got 13 chapters of a 9-5 worker doing his job

The idea was so good, but you had to go and ruin it, it’s not worth the read. There are so many plot holes it’s not even funny. The timeline makes no damn sense, even if it was AU it still makes zero sense. It’s trash don’t read it.

The writing is really good and the plot direction is unique, but ideas that he 'normal', '' just a background character', 'not a hero' , 'just a reliable guy' and 'little did he know that his small acts would set the foundation for his rise' are constantly repeated in rotation in some shape or form so many times that I bet the word count would 1/4 less than they are now. Your foreshadowing is way way to heavy. It's like someone repeating the same thing to you over and over and over again. Incredibly annoying. Moreover, the Mc seems incredibly depressed and only half alive. You indicate constantly that he's accepted reality and your synopsis indicated that he preferred the 9-5 life. Youre constantly repeating that he's accepted his reality and moved onx that he's proud of the work he does, and yet his attitude and what he's said, says the exact opposite. Now, I can understand why he is the way he is(miserable, depressed, cynical, burnt out, hopeless) but you keep saying he's come to terms with it, and that's simply not the case based on his own actions. Perhaps that's not what you meant to do, but that's how it reads. I actually like his character and couldn't relate to somone who would be content with a 9-5. In his position, I would be even more miserable. Those were the biggest problems to me, but they are certainly not difficult to fix. I like to write sometimes, but my memory is super bad, so I tend to repeat myself a lot. To fix this I started by reading the last five chapters I wrote before writing the next one and every once in a while I'll read through everything. It takes way longer, but solves the problem.

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I remember when bad writing used to be people not knowing about grammar and syntaxes but that could easily improved. Now people post Ai dogshit and don't even bother to try an hide it, then have the absolute gall to ask for patreon money, as if any self respecting human being would actually pay for this pile of ass. The whole premise of this story is an OP dude with a normal life but after a few chapters it basically throws that whole idea out the window. So many plot holes that author doesn't even try to fix or hide. And stupid repetitive dialouge and chapters. -100 out of 10, get bent.

even tho this shit was filled with ai and repeated sentences I still put up with it coz I liked the premise but it turned from bronze to pure shit after ch 17

i think the idea is good, it’s definitely one that hasn’t been used in a while for an mha fanfic. my issue is with the AI writing, it’s not an inherently bad thing, but it’s not polished at all. repetitive sentence structure, same idea being explained over and over, and the grandma sounding the exact same everytime. just all the bad things about AI writing being kept in the story’s writing

too much bs, insanely annoying and straight up ret@rded logic and writing,worse than ai slop.....from the past 10 chapters or so this shit has become totally unreadable.....it was good in the start

It is an interesting premise but it is also underwhelming. Hero X is a very visual character who was created for the visual medium of an anime, so the "attempt" to capture it in pure writing will always fall short. It is a very uninteresting read where I really can't be bothered to read the next sentence. The writing is just very stale, every word wears me down to boredom. I should be hanging on every sentence, not slogging through a bunch of words. It just feels like a bunch of filler that doesn't contribute to anything. I feel nothing reading this. It's not funny or thrilling or anything, just a load of meh. I can't really tell if this is ai or not, but I can tell that this is uninspired

More AI slop. Who even wants to read this? Pure laziness at its finest. I’d much rather deal with grammatical errors and written by a human than these clankers.

Reveal Spoiler

MHA: I'm the author of this 'fanfic', but I'd rather use chatgpt 24/7 to write.

The mc acts like a bipolar schizophrenic, you completely change his ego and character every few chapters and force mc to be one way or another.