
“So I can summon Heroines and Villainesses, but I just have to create them myself? Seems easy enough!”
Max lived for one thing and one thing only: a good story. Novels were the only escape in his mundane life. However, all the light novels and manhwas he read had the same problem:
Ruining female characters.
In all these novels, the powerful heroines and terrifying villainesses were always reduced to one-dimensional trophies obsessed with the MC. They had no goals or purpose of their own.
When Max discovered Awakener Supreme, he thought it would be different. It started out promising; a dark fantasy, detailed, consistent world building, a complex magic system and interesting characters.
But everything went downhill pretty fast. To please the fans, the dark tone vanished, and the fierce female cast was reduced to shallow fan service.
In a burst of anger, Max confronted the lead writer, criticizing him for ruining female characters, and claiming he could do a much better job at creating heroines and villainesses.
He never expected the universe to take him at his word.
Max suddenly wakes up inside the world of Awakener Supreme, and was given the chance to back up what he had claimed in the form of a unique class.
⸢ You have awakened your Class ⸥
⸢ Class: Architect - You can create heroines and villainesses and make them your Summons ⸥
⸢ Class Group: Summoner ⸥
Was Max all talk? Or can he truly create more powerful and consistent heroines and villainesses to help him survive the grim world of Awakener Supreme?
I've read several similar genre, each with their own twist and turns, however this one brought something new to the table. Mostly appropriate usage of a human female dual personality especially when faced with their significant other. Something I find rare which funny enough aligns with the authors original premise Kudos author, looking forward to read more
I absolutely love you author-san. The last few chapters around 40 were amazing. I love the character MC, Astensia, the world, and the dynamics. I hope you are always motivated to continue this story. If you hit a writer's block, that is fine take a break but please never NEVER EVER stop writing this story. I want to see the story grow, it's character, the world. I want to see it's ENDING. I will write another REVIEW to update this one once I have read around 150 ish chapters. Just know that i am always waiting for updates on your work.
What's up, potential novel readers? Welcome to my third novel. I'll be straightforward to try answer some commonly asked questions or possible questions.
Please excuse my English. The writing style is quite good—light and easy-going, though at times it gets bogged down in overly detailed descriptions of appearances. The world-building system is quite interesting, with its classes, mana and so on. As for the drawbacks: The first is, of course, the unfounded and utterly baffling hostility towards the protagonist. Everyone he meets wants to hit, beat up or kill him for reasons that are essentially unclear. There is a hierarchy at the academy, but there is no apparent reason why this hierarchy is necessary. Usually, such pressure is needed to encourage students to try harder. To get more resources, better conditions. But how are they supposed to try? There are no tasks, and dungeon runs only happen once a week? Medical treatment also costs money. In short, this isn’t an ‘unfair system’, but a ‘senseless system you don’t believe in’. And now to the most important point: through the mouth of his protagonist, the author criticises female characters in other works. At the same time, he seems to be promising us, ‘I’ll show you how to write realistic female characters’. Well, in my opinion, the author has completely failed at the first challenge. The description during the character’s creation is one thing, but every subsequent action, every subsequent dialogue of this character has failed to demonstrate a strong personality. This girl has become an obedient little dog; there is no sense of a fully-fledged character, no sense of her motivation—I see only obedience. Normally, I’d say it’s a decent attempt, but you issued a challenge, you belittled others, you indirectly promised to show how it should be done, and you frankly demonstrated a mediocre standard.
the premis of this book is really interesting and I wanted to like it but the world just makes no sense. they are in an academy where they are supposed to learn and it feels like a forced conscription type of situation because the MC was dragged there by "seers" but then there are the following issues that collapse the setting: - teachers dont teach anything substantial only what seems to be common knowledge or common sense -academy has rules against using powers but they dont apply to any antagonist -the library which should be a way for the poor and downtrodden to work hard on their own to accumulate knowledge is restricted and basically paid content there is really nothing to be gained in this academy, its more like a mandatory job in a closed ecosystem that does nothing to make someone want to grow a hero or defender of humanity. the most incoherent thing was the hazing, its not hazing, its like you join a judo class, become white belt and you suddenly have 20 black belts that beat you half to death just because they can and then you get into debt to heal yourself so you can "bring glory to the judo art" that was the most frustrating thing to read, the teacher that was ambitious and wants summoner D to succeed watches her miracle student get destroyed by OTHER SUMMONER CLASS SENIORS and arrive late to her classes due to it and she says and does nothing... summoners are looked down? there is a miracle guy in summoner D that can bring glory to our class? I thing the best thing to do it keep sending him to the infirmary and get him into higher debt so that elementalists and other classes can keep trampling us... this makes no sense and the fact thst everyone, literally everyone is okay with this logic is insane... lastly, the conversation with the dean in a private room, reached his classmates ears by the time he took the elevator down? get out of here
just binged read. one thing, just as the MC was complaining about the heroines being one dimensional, this story's characters are also one dimensional in a way(ignorant/unintelligent/way too arrogant/less IQ). Really felt it when MC was complaining about som sh*t and later, author wrote same sh*t. i guess someone forgot to take his words for himselves. if the real world is not same as the game world, then, do not make make other people some mindless fools that cannot think properly. it is not the game world anymore. it js eeal life for the MC and the real life is complex, not linear. also, lf possible, keep inner dialogue short.
Story is good until the author started to contradiction themselves. Stated in the fourth chapter that MC didn’t need Grace to fuel his summons, then in chapter 19 he runs out of grace for fueling his summons and now he has to find some plot work. Not a total killer but author made it a core reason for MC being the way he is only to just ignore for plot development. Read it if your bored but definitely not if you’re looking for a good story that isn’t going to be a potential plot armor twist get out of jail free card for the author. Will keep reading since it is a decent story and I’m bored with nothing else to read atm.
Está increíble la novela espero más capítulos ...,...............................................................................................
A good premise is destroyed by bad worldbuilding. The Academy just doesn't make any sense whatsoever. doesn't teach shit. The library isn't accessible unless you pay (only the weak pays). Characters are stupid as hell, which is ironic when the entire synopsis is about how one dimensional character ruined a novel.
2nd update dropped score a bit cause of shit academy on the whole breaking rules in fighting with mc going into debt. i get probs the mc social status being low so they dont care about other hurting him but that doesnt make the story intertesting.
i thought it would be something new but it is still a cliché .
it is One of the good novels. i personally like mc personality, he ragebait without trying it is funny. Just one question will mc train or he will only rely on his summons.
Okay, I pretty much like everything so far. This is my first time catching a good novel this early. The whole premise is fun, and the Academy is actually more interesting than expected and I'm not an Academy novel fan at all.
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I was hoping for something new but it's just the usual cliché, pretty mid